Poem -
Square Root
The apathetic medic,
Avoiding the truth sleuth.
Ever learn; never burn,
The motto; of an empathy grotto!
Had a selfish wish,
A greed feed,
On the plate of hate!
Waiting to win discipline!
After a self esteem dream,
Of a bust in lust.
While the moth of sloth,
Was missing charity verity!
Lived with this evil little gnome,
At his root of the problem home!
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Comments
That's awesome Jim!
Loved the wording.
Very cool write!
Matthew.
Means a lot coming from you Mathew! I hope you realized I enjoy your play on words and was trying to jest in response? I enjoy your poetry and your fun stories!......................................................Jim
I did Jim, sorry, I was confused by the one star, but it may have been a mistake, because I always thought you were a nice guy, and would never hurt anyone's feelings, so thanks. I did write you a PM, but you must not have read it yet.
Anyway, I appreciate you liking my humor(I'm down to 2 people who like it, you and Cherie, and she has to say she likes it. lol), but if I had to pick two people to like my humor it would be you and Cherie! And Being Me! She pretends to like my humor, too.
Anyway, always happy to see you, Jim, and I'm glad I caught this one.
M.
Clever as Hell!!......I LOVE the carefully placed word choices......creates a charm that brings a smile.....and applause for the creative talent that conveyed it in the first place!!.......ALL STARS!!......Bravo brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Thank you brother Tony!
Thank You Cherie!
Thank You bunches Hj for the support!
clean bill from docs! hope you are well!
Thanks for reading Dominique!
Sorry for being late to the Party Jim! This line stood out to me the most.
Seemed to connect with me, perhaps on the same wavelength of my style if you know what I mean ;)
Love it!
Kind regards,
Your friend Max
You must be influencing me my fluid friend! thank you!.......Jim
wonderful poem
Thanks Greg!
Thank You Lorna!
Well chosen words and arranged so elegantly your poem, which is so vey neat and very, very clever. Loved it!
Great creative and poetic talents on show for one and all.
Thanks for sharing Jim and full marks and pinned.
Thanks Shaun!