Poem -
Stallion (sonnet)
T'is brazen beauty brings love forth
Brings love forth and first
Upon a white stallion horse
That stands upon sand's thirst
Alas the rain that falls on lies
Replaced by other forms
Beneath the grey sullen skies
Which the thunder god adorns
Until exhaustion begs place to rest
In seas that still bring peace
You wear upon your scarred torn breast
An emerald broach release
So all that is lost shall be found
So is the secret in the earth deep beneath the ground
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Comments
Another masterpiece and the quality of the alliteration is brilliant as well as the meter and technical ability in your style. Very surreal to see someone of this quality write on a forum of this making. Get a manuscript together and send it in if you already haven't.
No man I'm just writing for life
Manuscript :) ay thanks for good thoughts
i self publish a book I did it made me happy
Kind rgs Jai :)
thank you, it's difficult to
write sonnets about stallions
thought I would to match a feeling
i had. Thanks Iman!
Good write
WILLIAMSJI
Thanks Williams;
Jai :)
Jai's on fire!!! Awesome awesome!!!! xx
Carey I like your enthusiasm
it make the stallion run faster!!
thank you mate
luv Jai :)
Yee har!!! ride like the wind..and fire...your the messiah!@!
you are spirit :) ))))))
Beautiful write Jai, and a beautiful pic :)
Wo my late reply because I did not see
My apology Blossom and thank you!!
Kind rgs JAi :)