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Stars so bright

As I sit looking up at  the dark night sky, reminiscing of times gone by, friends who have left this world before there time.
I often wonder if the stars that shine so bright against this darkest night sky are them showing me that they have not left me as I thought behind. 

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Silent Dreamer

In two lines you've expressed so much.. a very heart-breaking and yet heart-warming write! Very well done👏🏽

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Tony Taylor

Hi Coleen!!
You have captured such a lovely reflection from yourself of those who have passed on and you find in the night sky......some powerful phrasing here that would be (and I mean no offense here) even MORE powerful if you formatted it differently......regardless, a gorgeous debut' piece you've offered up here......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister......and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo 🐧✴❤

 

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lodigiana

A piece filled with nostalgia, longing and sadness yet with a final element of hope to cling to..so much in so few words..well done Coleen  a really enjoyable piece ..and welcome to Cosmo!    Lodigiana x

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Coleen

Thank you for your comment it means a lot. 

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Simon Bromley

Welcome to Cosmo with such a provoking write.  I agree with Tony but a really nice debut piece, well done.

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John Astley

A lovely poem,  and a warm welcome to Cosmo.
John 

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