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Stimulation

Red hot desert sand bleak and abandoned,
Dried grass around the caves in the hills,
Digging a hatchet is found the ancestors left behind,
A thick heavy sadness enveloping like a shroud,
Shadows dance by the foreboding hills, 
Following the coiled path between trees to a leafy park,
Animals foraging for food in hollow logs,
Lost in time and space yet having sensory fulfillment

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Marion

Really interesting write Tracy...in the scene there with you 🤗🤗

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Marion

Lol...I don't know where any of mine come from either 😄😄

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Tony Taylor

Hi TRACY,
This is a very descriptive write.....and is filled with poetically delivered imagery.....it is vivid enough to paint a fine scene in the minds eye of the reader ~ ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Ps. I did try to leave stars on your page but it wasn't working properly!!  : (

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Tracy Mcfayden

I've been told that the stars can not be done before I will report the stars 

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