Poem -
stone in the pond
their is a heavy weight on my shoulder
I cant get back to where I was
climbing and always falling
once I near the end
if I cant find a time
I am lost in this place
unable to think without being brought up to breathe
once I fall into this trance
their is no chance
because I will always relate to
that stone in the pond
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Hey Jacob I think we all like we have a weight on our shoulders whether through life pain or crazy women who drive you insane , . Thought provoking write. Â Cheers rock. Welcome to cosmoÂ
Hey Jacob!!.......there's an interesting voicing to this piece........can't quite put my finger on it........but I will eventually...........it's like a suicide thing........where you threw yourself into the pond with a stone around your neck or something.........it's not often that I'm compelled to ask what the intent was behind a piece.........but this IS one of those times..........well done my friend.........ALL STARS.........T xo