Poem -

strange magic...

strange magic...

sailing softly through the sun
tracing wave shapes among the clouds
right along here was peaceful and quiet
and river sounds floating nearby
no one knows this place but I, alone
getting further away, to a place unknown
escaped; to a time space that is my own

my mind knows the way down the hole
and my heart has felt this love you stole
gripping me tighter, dragging me lower
in that strangely magical world I'm free
coming closer, pulling me deeper
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Iva Christ

this is realy good keep up the good work!!!

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zZzleepy

Thanks so much!! and I sure will keep trying lol πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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zZzleepy

thanks so much poetess!!
xoxo

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LULU KING

in that strangely magical world I'm free
coming closer, pulling me deeper

This line draws me in deeper in the world that you've created. Thanks for allowing me to jump into this magical world. :)

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zZzleepy

I'm glad I helped paint that picture! <3

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