Poem -
Success
​Can I fulfil my dreams?
When all I'm looking at,
Is a cream sheet of paper,
Filled with nothing but,
Hate, crime and failure,
Just 'go with it' they said,
And turn the hate into positive,
The crime into dreams,
Failure into responsibility,
To become success.
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Significant write which stresses you should never lose the ambition to succeed whatever you choose to do !
Ambition drives you forward and helps you realize your dreams !
Nice write ! Â :)
thankyou!
Thanks for writing ! Â :)
Excellent verse, highly positive and optimistic in outlook, good write, pour more and more poems,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
thankyou! I will continue to do so
In Spanish Success to spell Ă©xito, take away the or and becomes exit in English, however Events in Spanish is written sucesos.
Why I say this?
Because the brilliant composition of Caitlin Charberlain things negatives become positive and even the failures more resounding when they assume responsibly lead to success.
Caitlin says:
“Odio, crimen y fracaso. Tan solo “con él” dijo, y el odio se transformó en algo positivo, el crimen en un sueño, y cuando ese fracaso se asume con responsabilidad nos puede conducir al éxito”
In Spain they say regarding the following:
"There is no evil that good doesn't come"
A greeting.
A great write Caitlin . Always a negative  and turn a positive .  It is the way I live . CheersÂ