Poem -
succumb.
Longitude, latitude,
Fatigued, gratitude,
Thy mind abounds may run,
Withe open heart,
Thy rising moon,
Thy falling sun,
Never shall brake,
Upon dawn,
Nor succumb ,
Within night skies,
Thy world awaits,
Thy destiny
Not done,
Hours on earth thy take,
No moments,
Nor standing's ache,
More of earth shall walk ,
Or run,
thy destinies rising sun,
Until the fulfilment,
falling moon,
Thy destinies' undone,
Then shall rise within thy skies,
Thy destiny succumb .
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Comments
Nardine
I'm so glad I finally made some time to read more of your poetry hun :)
Keep on writing as I will continue to keep on reading..Loved this piece :)
Thank you sweetheart i shall :) couldn't stop if i tried, I'm glad you enjoyed this one much love to you Carey, nardine xoxo
Hi Nardine, I really liked this, the timing in this is really precise, it flows swimmingly well......I enjoyed the read...........smiles......tony xx
Thank you Tony your a sweetheart, much love to you, nardine xx
Hi Nardine,
Time stands still for no one and succumbs to nothing. Yet the utensils, of mother nature, that grooms this great planet, i.e. .( the sun, moon, wind, rain and so on), all has a due date, paid for and acquired through destiny’s leasing To one entity’s beginning of its mission and the end of another and vice versa a game of leap frog through time and space by both entity’s, (the sun and the moon) each submitting to an overpowering scheduled point and time in space, through their own duly acquired time zone. Each forced to or yield to an overwhelming scheduled time zone by the other......Deep thought, have you placed in this one but all that has been inserted in this one is very well truth laden.........
Nice one,
Jim
Thank you dear friend Jimmy for your appreciation, and your lovely informative reply, much love and admiration to you sweetheart, xx nardine xx