Poem -

Sucker Punched

After the dream,
reality hit ..
Delivering with it
one hell
of a sucker punch
and simultaneous
knee to the groin ..
It felt like
some kind of
unanaesthetised,
outer body thing ..
A near death
experience perhaps ..
But then,
whatever it was ..
I swear, I shall never
try to touch
her there, ever again ..

 

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Lorna

Hello Neville,  this made me laugh a little(maybe i have a touch of evil in me) .but hopefully the dream was painless!!
Lorna xx

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Neville

I wouldn't dream of letting on .. a gentleman neva does .. but shall leave my thank you's here on view for you ma'am .. thank you .. x

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Marion

Some dreams are exceptionally real...almost nightmarish in their potency like we've crossed into a different reality. I'd still go back for more though. Excellent Nev x

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Neville

You are so my cuppa tea our Marion .. Many thank you's my lovely friend x

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