Suffering Journey.
As i look at this little gift from god, as she dances to the wind making her own path in the corn,brushing its hair on her way.
Down to the river i know, day after day playing on her swing, or sat on a branch watching the world go by.
She looks so alone and hollow for her years. What can i do for her?
Day by day i follow this Angel in wonder with her aura so bright, skin with a rose with a petal on each cheek. Then a day dawns, when i see this face with her eyes slightly closed, but just blocking out the sun. Thank you.
Now i see a young Lady, its not loneliness i see its peace.
For she has wasted no time, she's found her lost love in nature.
Shall i follow this path ?
No leave it its her missing love,
Her world ,
Her sanctuary ,
Her private place,
Without a Mother.
I'am so proud, i snort back the tears your MINE.
ALWAYS.
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An excellent write. Thanks for sharing, I love the below lines.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much
Regards Mark
Mark you can feel the love in this poem, beautiful sentiment pal, 5*s from me :)
Thxs Jason.
Mark a perfect write up as always ..!! Really like ur style of writing.!
Keep Writing
Love
Surabhi..:)
Thank you my friend. x
Mark a perfect write up as always ..!! Really like ur style of writing.!
Keep Writing
Love
Surabhi..:)
lovely write congrats x
Thank you for your kind words,
Regards Mark.
A very creative write here Mark...Well done! x
Carey ,nice to hear positive feed back,
Cheer's Mark.
Another beautiful write ♥
Congratulations on your nomination!
Val ♥
Valerie, you always have a kind word, thank you so much, hope your having better days,
Regards Mark. x
such a beautiful piece ,i can almost feel the love for the daughter through this write .you have a great way of bringing us into that . tina x
Tina, thank you so much for your words of kindness, i am so pleased it touched you,
again many thanks Mark. x
Congratulationss Friend..:) feels great too see you won..!!!!! I am soo haappyy..:)
Your friend
Surabhi
Congratulations! I am so happy to see you won! You totally deserve it! Every poem you published was amazing and you are an inspiration to me! Keep writing :)
Val ♥
I liked ur poem
You did it!! x Big congrats Mark...well deserved :)
Thxs so much Carey x
A thoughtful Poem. All the words are woven in unique fashion. Congratulations!!!
Ravindra Kumar
thank you, its people like you who got me a vote, thxs for taking the time to read.
Regards Mark.
Dear Mark Pearson,
Please accept my congrats on your win in the final round. Keep writing more and more
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williamsji Maveli, i also love your poems they are very touching.