Suicide, Little brother, Bad mom

His life is fucked up

If you could see inside his head

You’d understand why he bled

His thoughts take over

He’s never close to sober

He really had no motivation

He was Gods one and only mistake creation

Lives with an abusive mother

And is only loved by his little brother

Yet when life gets a little too rough

His girlfriend’s words aren’t really enough

So he turned to self-harm

And he, put the razor to his arm

‘cause he just couldn’t do it anymore

So he cut ‘till red stained the floor

And as he was rushed to the E.R.

His little bro was crying in the car

But his mom was wishing inside her head

That maybe he’ll finally be dead

And as she celebrates

His girls heart just breaks

Wondering what she did wrong

Why didn’t he feel like he did belong?

(I'm still working on this I'd just like some feedback on how I'm doing so far)