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Suzy’s surpise

Suzy’s surpise

Suzy woke up one wonderful morning but it wasn’t wonderful at all tho the sky was blue and beautiful with that big bright yellow ball . She was so excited before she’d went to bed, Daddy and Mammy had a nice surprise for her at least that’s what her sister said . You see as she was standing with her oldest sibling they were both brushing their teeth, they looked into the mirror on the wall and her sister said “Oh goodness grief!!” Suzy took one glance and then all her whole wide world just fell apart, it felt like someone had stabbed a steel sword right thru her tiny heart

Every inch of her pale little face was covered in round red dots, infact underneath her pj’s was mllions of angry looking spots . There was spots ontop of dots and dots below those spots, Suzy couldn’t comprehend this, what an awful fright she got . “Oh no” said Suzy starting to cry then came  “Have I got a dreaded disease, am I going to die?” Just then Mother heard her wailing and rushed into the bathroom, “Suzy what an earth is wrong with you what ever is this gloom?” then paying further attention she saw Suzy’s little face which was covered in a red rash on every inch of skin space . “Uh Uh I think you have an allergy” Mammy said in her satisfaction, “It could have been that new bubble bath that’s caused this allergic reaction”

“An aller-what?!!” Susy shouted as her sister Sam stood near, “Yes and I have some marvellous cream for that so your rashes should soon clear!” replied Mother standing with a big smile on her face tho Suzy still frowned coz her body was a disgrace . So Mammy covered her in two tubes of see-through stuff and then their Daddy walked up the stairs and well he couldn’t help it, he burst out laughing at the sight of Suzy’s cares . Daddy lifted Suzy in his big strong arms and carried her down to the hall and there was a brand new pink bycycle propped against the wall . “Happy Birthday Suzy!!!” everyone sang when Mammy pulled the cord of a party-popper and it went up with a bang!! “All of your school friends are coming to play with you and Mammy’s making our tea so Suzy you had better put your lovely dress on and get ready for your party!!” said Daddy looking very pleased as Susy was racing round on her brand new pink bike that she had happily seized