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TAKE HER HOME

TAKE HER HOME

Take her home lord take her to restĀ 
to have had my mother, IĀ was blessed

Take her home lord hold her handĀ 
I have to let her go, i understand

Take her home lord show her love and peace
although willĀ take aĀ time, forĀ tears to cease

Take her home lord protect her pleaseĀ 
I will listen forĀ her voice in gentle breezeĀ 

Take her home lord till come my timeĀ 
hold her cherish her, my mother divine

Take her home lord in you IĀ trust
I am ready to heal, IĀ know IĀ must

Take her home lord its beenĀ nearly a year
I knowĀ she is safe with you, it is now clear

Take her home lord give her all my love​
I leave her inĀ your care now, Dear lord aboveĀ 

Ā 

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!...... what a loving write...... I've has two sister pass and I can relate TOTALLY!!......I Love the way you used two line stanza's........ made it come across as a prayer written in verse......... absolutely beautiful!!.........ALL STARS!!........hugs-n-smiles.........T xo.Ā  ?

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Tony Sorry to hear of theĀ loss of your sistersĀ 
so hard to go through:-(Ā 
As IĀ said to Cherie, IĀ feelĀ 
sure that my mam is with god andĀ 
I am accepting of thatĀ 
Thank you for yourĀ kind words and supportĀ 
Love n hugs Debs xo

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Deborah Evans

Hi Lisa Thank you so muchĀ 
for always supporting my workĀ 
it means a lot to me
I am going to catch upĀ 
on your work today :-)
Best wishes DebsĀ 
Ā 

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Rose Sho

Hi Debs...I empathize with you.....I know how it feels to lose a parent....I admire your faith leaving her in God's care...beautifully written

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi Dear Rose I think IĀ needed to come to termsĀ 
with my mam passing and thinking she is now withĀ 
god helps so much,( (Hug) )to you for the loss of your dad
Thank you for your kind wordsĀ 
Lots of love DebsĀ 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

I can relate to this...

Cancer has taken two of my grandparents and my mother, Aunts and Uncles...

It was quick from diagnosis to their passing in a few...

Some lingered...

Some went into remission, Ā but it came back...

My mother lived approx. six weeks from the time she was diagnosed until she passed away...

Of course, I don't believe that and I had many conversations with her Doctor...

Which he was caught in lies in many of my questions...

However, because she walked out the back door before a test...

No one would investigate...

I did tell him that next time he may not be so lucky...

He wasn't concerned...

He told me that a license taken from here doesn't affect his license in his country...

Legal murder?

Protected by cancer...

I am very sorry for your loss...

I couldn't wish my mother back...

For what?

She loved us and God with all her heart...

She's a champion...

She got her win/win...

Beautiful write my friend!Ā 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsongĀ 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong Ā I am sorry for your lossesĀ 
Cancer has been the devil in my family tooĀ 
Ā taking my grandfather father and my mother.
Last Thursday was a year to the date we found outĀ 
my mother was terminally ill with a brain cancerĀ 
after surviving throat and lung cancer. So it was 6 weeksĀ 
Ā from diagnosis to her passingĀ for us too I understand what youĀ 
say about the doctors once they know it is terminal,
for us we brought my mother home from hospital
and cared for her untilĀ she passedĀ 
It was so hard to accept my mam was going to dieĀ 
and when she did even harder,i wrote thisĀ poem toĀ sayĀ 
I am accepting she has gone and in god handsĀ 
But I will always miss my mamĀ asĀ you will miss yours
Thank you for your kind comments my friendĀ 
Hugs DebsĀ 

Ā 
Ā 

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