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Take My Breath Away

Take My Breath Away

Inspired by Berlin’s beautiful song from the movie Top Gun
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She takes my very breath away, one look and I just pant;
For she’s so beautiful, I can hardly breathe, I try, but I just can’t!
Yet as I gasp I feel so very good, one smile brings the purest air;
I inhale, and recuperate, in the magnificence of her hair!

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Cascading down to touch her thighs, I hunger to do the same;
I melt with just one word from her, the way she speaks my name!
For I have never heard it said before, from a woman’s loving soul;
I was so broken when I met her, but now she’s made me whole!

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I thank God for this gift to me, each day my being vastly is improved;
By having her and her truest love, my soul is ever soothed!
So “Take My Breath Away” forever, my beloved dear soulmate;
You are the air that will ever sustain me, and my life will ever sate!

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Jason Brown

Larry, my dear friend...

it seems that true love
in its purest form   leads to
asphyxiation

your friend & fan,

J ;)

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Larry Ran

My Dear Friend Jason,

We laughed so hard
You took both our breaths away
We must love you too

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Gayle McMillan

I really enjoyed this well written, and expressed work of art. Just absolutely beautiful Larry!

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Larry Ran

My Dear Gayle,

Your words are beautiful too!  You know how to bring happiness to my heart.

Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Rose Sho

This made me smile....very loving and romantic....Linda is indeed a sight to behold....with her beautiful hair....Lovely write my Sweet Daddio

Love you all

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Larry Ran

My Dear Sweet rose,

Yes, sweet Rose, I have been blessed!  I only wish we would have met 25 years before, and gotten to share each other's love for a quarter century more.  But sometimes, one does not find their soulmate till later in life.  So glad you enjoyed this.

All our love,
Linda and Daddio xxx

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