Poem -
Tears
Look deep into my eyes peer into my soul
sweep away the sadness its taking its toll
tears stream down my face I'm broken
lost without love no sovereign token
feeling like rain represents my tears
the thunder the lightning reflecting my fears
at the end of every storm rainbows arise
just as love will eventually dry these eyes
for love is the answer for everything
the only thing this queen needs is her king. <3
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Gold!...
Beautiful words....Lets hope we all find our Kings and Queens!
:) x
Thank you very much :) and your right ! I hope everyone finds their king and queens!:)
Really loved this Ashley
Maddison
Thank you maddison! :) I really appreciate the feed back :)
ashley pacheco,
Your verse overall, its sorrowfulness and the below lines qualifies you for my vote (5*) and nomination too. My applause.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you so much I'm really berry happy to receive the nomination :) I love to write I'm so happy I found a place to share it:)
Beautifully written, nomination from me too, well done! :)
Thank you very much I'm very much appreciative I'm so happy you liked it :)
sad and pretty.tears are the rain replenishing the pain till the sun can shine again
Awe I love that! :) and so true!
lost without love no sovereign token
what did you mean by that
I meant....I'm lost with out love and sovereign token represents the wealth that love brings not money wise but being rich with pleasure and love and in my minD being a queen without a king....
Once again, you brought your "A" game with this one, very alluring and a, "as a matter of fact," in it's presentation... Very pretty poem, i am sure each tear contained its own locked incasement, of unwanted memories inside..Job well done..
Take Care,
Jim
My lines of interest:
feeling like rain represents my tears
the thunder the lightning reflecting my fears
at the end of every storm rainbows arise
just as love will eventually dry these eyes
Thank you so much Jim I really appreciate your comments tonight I'm smiling because you completely understand everything that I'm trying to convey:)
Ashley,
You do a wonderful job, allowing your poems to speak the mind, heart and conveyed words, of the presenter and it is you, we thank for the readings...Very inspiring poems have you left us with..
Enjoy your day,
Jim