Beautiful
I AM BEAUTIFUL..
I say it three times through
I AM beautiful...
I need no clarifications from you
Many nights I'd hear your cold voice creep through my veins
my body shaking my heart experiencing pains
I'm without you now
But the scars you've left behind the constant reminder I must not allow
No one could love me you said...
Your wrong...
I LOVE ME.....
AND I AM STRONG!
Looking in the mirror gets easier everyday
I'm learning to love me in every single way
My eyes which show strength
Portrays all the burdens I've endured each length
My lips so soft and sweet like my character a fine woman to meet
My strong features contouring my face tell a story of a past time and place
Memories linger like the morning breeze
For these simple pleasures contain the keys
But never forget who your are
Your amazing and shine like the brightest star
Say it with me three times through
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL LOOK AT YOU !
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Hi Ashley,
This is a wonderful poem of self worth and self appreciation, in every way to be imagined...A oth dedicated to the only one, who knows you better than you, your valuable self pride, which is tattooed all over this one and for all the mentioned, (right reason) and some...A perfect "message," to have been left, to the reader...Very good advice and we can't love another, if you aren't satisfied, will who you are, as a person......
Warm Regards,
Jim
Thank you soo much for taking the time to comment on my poem:) I feel super passionate about this one I love writing poems that link so closely to my own situations and feelings :) thank u again your comment made my night :)
ashley pacheco,
The poem depicts a beautiful image of yourself, and you are so beautiful to yourself, this comes from your personality, Good, My applause, My Nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you !! I am very happy right now :)I really appreciate that :)
"You are quite welcome Ashley" and you produced, a wonderful poem in this poetic presentation and your passion for your works, is felt emanating from this one, leaving it drippy wet, with new found confidence, indicating your compassion, for what you bring to the table and the intense manner, in which you tend to tell your story through your poetry and as stated, "this one was told quite well and with confidence,"(well deserved).....
Take Care,
Jimmy
This is a "beautiful" piece of literature! Great flow and word usage.
This is wounderful. This should be commercialized on tv for the whole worl to here and see. This peice is definitly beautiful.
Wow this is a thunderous write.And for sure You are beautiful...