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TECHNICOLOR DREAM

TECHNICOLOR DREAM

Floating on cotton wool clouds 
while cherubs play harps with golden strings 
where tranquility resides,where your happy 
your smiling your heart sings
The cloud bursts raindrops fall heavily, 
then the sun appears shining down on the world
A rainbow appears,its colours vibrant
at its end,there lies that pot of gold.
These images seen in technicolor 
they feel real, what do they mean
Are you subconsciously searching for serenity
while you slumber and dream.
Have you traveled to heaven maybe 
a sneak preview of love and peace
where it feels like home, your troubled mind 
no longer burdened, has found a release 
I say take me to the cherubs holding harps
with golden strings, I wish to behold
and let me view the rainbow from up high
these images I see, are my personal pot of gold  
 

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  J Thanks so much for your kind words 
sorry for the late reply 
Best wishes Debs x
 

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Lorris Morris

A LSD....write....smile......beautiful.....thank you......all smiles

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Lorris  Smiles back to you :-)
Thank you for stopping by 
Best wishes Debs 

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Mizzy ......

Delightfully peaceful to read Deborah.....

Very nicely written,

Regards Mick.

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Mizzy Thank you for stopping by 
and for your kind words.Always appreciated 
Sorry for my late reply
Best wishes Debs 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Debs,

I too have had this "Technicolor Dream".  But being so young, have spent decades in its' remembrance, never fully comprehending its' meaning.  Now comes our most perceptive Deborah Evans, interpreting what I experienced over six decades ago.  She shows me the guiding Angels and I am now able to harken their blessed sounds.  

She has taken me to the "Rainbow's End", where I've found my "Pot Of Gold".

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry Wow your comment have blown me 
away, how uncanny that we both have had this dream 
We maybe must have been destined to cross paths 
to have it interpreted somehow 
Thank you Larry such interesting comments 
always appreciated 
Sorry for the late reply 
Love n hugs Debs xox
 

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Rose Sho

 A very refreshing piece..Enjoyed every word in every line....Thanks for sharing....

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sweet Rose Thank you for your 
kind words they are always encouraging 
and keep me writing 
Lots of love Debs 
 

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Leah Yodico

I love the thoughts of all he colors of the rainbow!!  very symbolic!!!!  Great write!!  

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Leah Thank you for stopping by my page 
and for your kind comments 
Glad you enjoyed 
Best wishes Debs 

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