Poem -
tell me
tell me I will stumble
upon you to adore
your soul to tingle
another once more
tell me to quench
your thirst with my all
that one of a kind dear
that kind you're yearning for
tell me it's only
a matter of time
before I meet you
for you to find
a dreamer who's hungry
for lust and affection
for that particular touch
that impeccable connection
tell me there's more
of what I remember
refresh my thoughts
let me surrender
to the highest of highs
of what it once was
a reason to live
now a lost cause
tell me it's genuine
that we can grow old
together as one
as we remold
tell me you're here
tell me it's you
tell me I'm sane
tell me.............tell me love is true
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Dear Poetess,
Good write, thanks for sharing, My applause, My vote
"tell me it's only
a matter of time
before I meet you
for you to find
a dreamer who's hungry
for lust and affection
for that particular touch
that impeccable connection.."
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks William!
Ah this poem is so so romantic Dear friend,I am touched by your write.Thnxxx for sharing.
Cheers
Thank you Piusha! Great to meet you..
Bahar
Wow BB!!....I think you've found your voice my friend.......this comes trippingly off the tongue.......as though were so easy for you to write........its flow is flawless.......and intent so well conveyed.........VERY strong write sister girl.........5*s FAV.......well done B..........smiles.........T xx
Thank you Tony. It's always flattering to hear from a scholar such as yourself. I feel like I have so much to say but I don't know how....It will get better with time.
B
Hi Jeremy. Thank you for your insight.
Yes, a wondering love I am!! LOL>.it's been a while since I've fallen in love and it's difficult to think that I will feel that sort of love again...So obviously that's what this poem is about.
Yes, maybe sanity is subjective (or objective, I forget which one is which). I love the way you put it. 100% agreed. We as writers are merely more observant than others perhaps. Thanks for your words. P.S..please call me Bahar. LOL. Ma'am is not one of my favorite titles although your politeness is appreciated.
Thanks again. Bahar
Nice sentiment and very well written, I enjoyed this poem very much. Cheers.
Thank you Patrick. This is one of my favorites. Nice to know you took the time to find it. Have a great day!
BB