Thanks for Giving

Evening; crowds rush frenetically to
fully stocked markets
preparing for Thanksgiving;
she beds down on large
contaminated boxes,
dimming streetlight, her only warmth as she
sleeps with the night.
Morning; devoted families prepare
to unite in abundance as she ravages
a dumpster behind McDonald’s
desirous for her “breakfast
of champions”, or just one morsel.
Later; giggling children frolic innocence,
their stained holiday outfits bleeding outlines
of brown gravy and blueberry, while she praises
God’s benevolence for directing
her to her newly acquired Couture
tattered dress buried in the rusted
bottom of a trash can hidden
away in her playground; a caliginous alleyway.
Twilight shimmers contentment,
loved-ones’ count blessings as she hunts refuge from
uncertain weather, a newspaper blanket her only ammunition
to arrest a pitiless whipping wind.
Evening; holding memories tight, another
holiday passes for the grateful,
she glances up as a compassionate, well-dressed
woman reeking of designer perfume passes her
a twenty dollar bill,
her desperate tears wash her dirty
cheek numb and with words hardly audible,
she thanks, for the giving.

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Comments
Beautifully written; the contrasting images are particularly well judged and effectively placed within the unfolding scenario.
The final stanza is heartening, but you've built up such a full picture of quotidian misery that one is left with the nagging question...
What's she going to do tomorrow?
J ;)
Hello, Jason!
Thank you so much for leaving such kind words regarding my piece. Homelessness is a hard reality to see and not easy to write about, but I felt compelled to do so and feel such sadness for those less fortunate.
For the last stanza, I wanted the impact to be about how a little bit of kindness and generosity makes a difference. I do understand and appreciate your point of view though. ?
Have a great day!
Lindi
How often do we pass a homeless person, give them something and walk on? feeling that we have 'done our bit' and dont look beyond the 'now' ...I do voluntary work in a food bank and see every type of person come in and realise everyday that there is no stereotype..ever... with one unpaid bill we could all end up there. I love the way you poem has expressed the sadness and the solitude and uncertain future of this individual. Nice work Linda
Lodigiana xx
Hello, Lodigiana,
Thank you so much for your kind comments! The fact that you volunteer at a food bank is wonderful!(I do some volunteering too) We all need to appreciate our blessings and realize that any bit of help we can provide can make a huge difference!
Have a great day!
Linda ❌❌
Hi Linda, The stark contrasts between the affluent and poor really stands out here. It really is a great piece of poetry. As the colder season approaches it's good to realise we could be so much worse off, and the humanity in us should try to help those less fortunate where we can.
Brilliant
Lorna xxx
Hi, Lorna!
Thank you so much for your kinds words. One act of kindness goes a long way and we should be aware of what is going on outside of our comfortable living space. Especially, for those vulnerable souls who must deal with harsh winters.(we have cold and frosty winters here in New England)
❌❌
Lindi