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That clandestine character 🌝

That clandestine character 🌝

There’s a clandestine character hiding under a blanket of boring grey tho the weather forecast looks optimistic for allday sunshine today

Well Mr Sun needs to hurry up... get that big hat upon his head
We have planned eating alfresco, it may indooors instead

I’m still hopeful...positivity is my aim.. it would be sods law for my ploughman’s lunch... really such a shame

So abracadabara I’ve waved my magic wooden stick.. let’s see if that yellow ball of warmth & happiness appears quick

Clearing all these shrouded clouds... turning grey to cobalt blue, providing such a perfect day to do what we want to do🌝

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Tony Taylor

Dear poet sister JILL!!.....I haven't been on much lately but Cherie tells me you've been putting up a lot of stuff... I think you're writing these quite quickly, which is not an easy thjing to do while trying to keep some semblance of poetic form, timing, intent, and a compelling nature... so I must applaud your efforts...... there's nothing like Positivity to compel the reader thoughts and mind and you pulled it off beautifully here with some added charm in the mix!!......ALL STARS!!... well done girlfriend!!......thanx for the smiles.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

HI Jill...There is just something so uplifting and mood changing when the sun appears....I hope you get that blue sky back...and that the sun sticks around...It really can make a difference in how our day is viewed.  I love your title for this!  Lol  ;)  xo

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Jill Tait

Thank u Mr & Mrs Taylor I so like u
pair in my poetic Cosmo world 💙❤️

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