That Girl Is a Freak

That girl is a freak
They condem her because they are weak
A freak indeed, an aquired taste
Don't like her? Aquire some taste
That girl is a freak
In her you will never find the peace that you seek
She glares evil right in the face
Winning demons at their own race
That girl is a freak
And you condem her because you are weak
Run, but you can't hide
It's only a matter of time before you cross the line
That girl is a freak
Psychotic, hypnotising and unique
Be careful boys, she knows your weakness
It is her, our beloved dark mistress
That girl is a freak
They condem her because they are weakÂ
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really good poem i liked it i can relate to that girl people call me a freak all the time.
I am glad you enjoyed, thanks!
Hello Amber...
Awesome write as always!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
P.S. Now, I can't get that song out of my head..
That is funny hehe. Thank you sparrow
Hi  Amber Great write reads as lyrics
of a song, great message within itÂ
to accept people for who they areÂ
Love the repetition works so wellÂ
A pleasure to read!Â
Best wishes DebsÂ
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thank you deb for the feedback, you rock!
And yes, acceptance was a key aspect I tried to portray. Good catch lol
It could insinuate acceptance between lovers, or society... It is for the reader conclude.... that's the good thing about art or poetry, It can bee seen in so many ways
yes it certainly can, Amber, lol....I enjoy the poem and your commentary as well, this write has all the qualities of a really cool pop song that you carry around in your head, hum and feel pretty darn comfortable about it....I really enjoyed Amber, your style is a revelation....seasons' greetings poetess
Revelation huh? lol Thank you Christopher for your encouraging feedback, it means a lot. And seasons greetings to you as well.Â