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That Girl Is a Freak

That Girl Is a Freak

That girl is a freak

They condem her because they are weak

A freak indeed, an aquired taste

Don't like her? Aquire some taste

That girl is a freak

In her you will never find the peace that you seek

She glares evil right in the face

Winning demons at their own race

That girl is a freak

And you condem her because you are weak

Run, but you can't hide

It's only a matter of time before you cross the line

That girl is a freak

Psychotic, hypnotising and unique

Be careful boys, she knows your weakness

It is her, our beloved dark mistress

That girl is a freak

They condem her because they are weak 

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brazelena martin

really good poem i liked it i can relate to that girl people call me a freak all the time.

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sparrowsong

Hello Amber...

Awesome write as always!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

P.S. Now, I can't get that song out of my head..

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Amber Great write reads as lyrics
of a song, great message within it 
to accept people for who they are 
Love the repetition works so well 
A pleasure to read! 
Best wishes Debs 

 

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

And yes, acceptance was a key aspect I tried to portray. Good catch lol

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

It could insinuate acceptance between lovers, or society... It is for the reader conclude.... that's the good thing about art or poetry, It can bee seen in so many ways

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Christopher Correia

yes it certainly can, Amber, lol....I enjoy the poem and your commentary as well, this write has all the qualities of a really cool pop song that you carry around in your head, hum and feel pretty darn comfortable about it....I really enjoyed Amber, your style is a revelation....seasons' greetings poetess

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

Revelation huh? lol Thank you Christopher for your encouraging feedback, it means a lot. And seasons greetings to you as well. 

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