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That girl that walks in the rain

That girl that walks in the rain

That girl that walks in the rain
I was sitting watching her
I saw her walk to the lake
By the bay that’s where she
Got on her knees to say a prayer

That girl that walks in the rain
Had a smile on her face as
She walks in pace among the flowers 
 As the butterflies fly around her
 
That girl that walks in the rain 
And if the sun should peak out
Behind the clouds and a
Rainbow came out and it
Shined as bright as her Smile
That girl that walked in the rain.

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Shirley Harrison

Beautiful, a great sense of happiness I get from this, personally I love the rain especially in the summer. 🌹 

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Greg Etsell

thank you Shirley
it is about some one i know
 

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Shaun Cronick

Greg, a wonderful poem of light and an uplifting one as well, just the tonic of contentment needed for today.
A great poem and a balm of calm and innocence threaded throughout.
Poetry hats off to you my friend for imagineering and kindly sharing.
Hope all is well with you Greg and peace be upon you.

And I believe this is the first of your two Debbie poems you have upped on Cosmo and will read the other one tomorrow night.👍

And a very wise person once said...

'Offer thanks for the rain in your life which waters the flowers of your soul'
 

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Greg Etsell

Hi Shaun how did you know this poem was about Debbie I never mentioned her in her first poem or this poem how did you know and I really don’t have much with her except just friendship but she’s an awesome lady. I don’t know if anything will ever become, but just friendship, how did you know About her name, Debbie, because I didn’t mention her name and Your smile Or this poem cause I looked on both poems and I never said Anything about her name?

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Shaun Cronick

Hello Greg and you did mention her name in the comment section of  your poem The Guy In The Blue Shirt and also the poems she was featured in, the other being Your Smile.

Hope that helps resolve any mystery. either that or they're putting L.S.D or some other mind expanding psychic drug in the water here in Cardiff !!!
If so I'm off to play the lottery!

And Greg I'm fortunate to have longer off from work this week after recent events and can really catch up on yours I have missed :)

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Yiyan Han

Sounds poetic: 'Offer thanks for the rain in your life which waters the flowers of your soul'

Thanks Shaun!

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Yiyan Han

"That girl that walks in the rain" lets me hear "dancing in the rain" once again. Joyous!

For whatever reason people like walking in the rain, sometimes in heavy rain, might imply something needs to wash away(?)

Great write, Greg.
 

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Neville

Absolutely splendid Greg now one of my faves of yours .. Neville 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you it’s my favorite too. Thank you.
Neville 

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Neville

You really are most deserving and doubly welcome Greg .. All the very best of Good Things my friend Neville

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