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That look

That look

Judgment amazingly clear.
The signature smirk,
As eyes go up then down.
Criticism mirrors back emotions.

Eye rolls famous,
As it speaks its language.
Eyebrows shoot up in despair,
As moth suppresses curses.

Comparing is the only key,
Leaving other victims,
Wondering what they did wrong,
While chain reaction repeats itself,
Leaving that look.
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Ella

Please tell me i'm not the only person who has gotten this look before! Thanks for reading my poem, feel free toΒ criticize, and comment! Β sometimes I feel like this is the story of lots of peoples lives:)

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Tony Taylor

Hi ELLA!!...VERY intriguing piece!!.....I think you should get a ton of comments on this....... it's one of those age-old questions...... that have existed since time eternal!!....... "why's everybody looking at me!?"..... when the truth is you're wondering about that one particular look!!..... the one that makes you wonder......I LOVE this...... can't wait to see what kind of comments you get.......I won't go there!!.... but I will say...... you're not alone!!.......ALL STARS!!...... work it!! Own it!! Work it!! Own it!!..... smiles!!....T xo ?✴❀???

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Ella

thanks so much!Β 

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Ella

thank you!

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Ian William

Excellent, Ella! I think most people can relate to this, that judgmental look or words of ignorance, ones that make you shiver as your blood boils, knowing you're unfairly treated. What I have always done, is let the anger burn naturally but only for a short period, followed by a calm reflection of events, wherein you know you've done nothing wrong and the ones who have, think of them as nothing worthy of an anxious breath,Β  carry yourself through with thoughts of things or others truly worth thinking about. So if you face the the same experience, be numb to what doesn't exist.

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Ella

Wow! thanks Ian. I am going to use that advice!

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Ella

Wow! thanks for reading

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Larry Ran

Dear Ella,

A most thought provoking write, Ella.

Just one look, is all it took
The message there, of my despair
A broken promise, a broken heart
Searching for a brand new start

Love,
Larry xxx

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Ella

thanks so much! means a lot

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