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That shining sun ๐ŸŒž

That shining sun ๐ŸŒž

I wanna drown inside the depths of delightful dreams

Where those fathoms untangle fantasies beneath shredded seams

If I could close my eyes and stop my mind from reliving reality that I unwind

Beneath that beyond betwixt oneโ€™s head are reveries lying in a bed

Where light is brighter than the shining sun

And inside those chimeras is only fun...
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Greg Etsell

WHAT GREAT POEM
WOW MANY VOTES
FOR THISย 

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanks Greg my dear friend โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’•

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Shaun Cronick

Jill just what the good poetry doctor ordered a little bit of sun or with your well written dreamy bright and warming poem oodles of it and needed too.
ย Five shining starsโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ and happily pinned as well.
Thanks for writing and sharing your upbeat and needed poem.๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’•โญ๏ธ
And I hope the sun was also shining on you and Northumbria today as well.
Stay safe and not forgetting warm too!๐Ÿ‘Œ

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Jill Tait

Awww Thank you my lovely friend yes twas a lovely great walking day so I did 5 mls xx๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’•

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Pratibha Savani

Hello Jill!! Greg and Shaun are correct...great poem and just what we needed!! Was so sunny today!! And I love this short piece to set us in the mood for summer! Perfectly pinned!! Stay well. Your friend Px๐Ÿ’œ

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanks Pratibha my lovely ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒž๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒผโค๏ธ

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Pratibha Savani

๐Ÿ™Œ๐ŸŒป๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ‘ I loved it! I will catch up on some of your other writes very soon!! Px

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanking you kindly my lovely Chickadee teehee Iโ€™ve just wrote a funny one hoping it puts a smile on Cosmo faces luv ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’•

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Marion

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Jill Tait

Awww Marion my lovely lass โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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