Poem -
THE ANGEL OF THE SEA
I sit hear by the sea drinking tea
and dawn is coming as i watch
the sunrise the angel of the seaĀ
flys by her wings are big andĀ
beautiful as she sing song ofĀ
love and hope and her songĀ
fills my heart i hope it will
never part she lands near by
she beautiful and she told meĀ
to close my eyes and hold her hand
and to feel the love of GOD she isĀ
the angel of the sea she told me youĀ
can open your eyes agin she hadĀ
smile on her face as she flew away
over the sea singing a song of loveĀ
and hope and joy she is the angel
of the sea
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Thank you CherieĀ
I hope that you will read my other poem called the flowers in my life
Awww I was lost with your angelic angel of the sea reading this Greg so beautiful ā¤ļø
Thank you Jill
Aww you are so very welcome xxx
From the first line I was captivated by the sound and imagery.Ā
I've been known to write reviews and talk about punctuation, however in this instance, the format is brilliant. It reads like, one very long and beautiful lyric poem... it glides straight to the end.
The words, tea, sea and she, gave the poem a soft sounding rhyme.
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Hi Greg,Ā
very nice poem..I love the imagery and I love angels.Ā
thanks for sharing
thank you LeahĀ