Poem -

The bamboo patch

The bamboo patch

this was my place of solitude
under the bamboo trees

i was a teen then....now the panther roams my scent

the only place for peace then were under the bamboo trees

i would spread some papers and lay there for hours in life

to listen to their leaves as they whisper never ending mysteries

i sometimes thought they knew i was there

but it was the kind wind blowing all its serenity to my Soul

i would listen to the friction of the bamboo trunks like a love affaire .....of a rhythm of some Madi Gras.....a carnival in their bamboo's life

then the brown doves.....will sometimes join like to say greetings.....but i can't stay.....got to go and fly away

the bamboo patch was a part of me......my tree house of magical sounds

now my panther has taken my trail so neededΒ 

so much to tell.....so much

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Wendy Wass

Great imagery Lorris well written x

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Christopher Correia

Lorris, awesome man! Β there wasΒ a bamboo patch in the front yard in Trinidad, my uncle cut it down there were too many scorpions roaming around in there....you're lucky you never got stung, and the reader is lucky as well, to be reading exceptionally fresh poetry, liking your style...peace and love, Trini

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