Poem - 21 December 2021, 05:40

THE BOY AND HIS DRUM

I looked up in the night
Sky and saw a bright
Light far off in the distance

I could hear drums playing
And they were singing a song

About a new baby i followed
The sound and thats where i found

The boy and his drum by the
Manger and the light in the

Manger was bright and the
Boy and his drum played

All night and as they sing
A song about the new born

king the sun came up and
The bells are ringing in the church

Many people walked by with gifts
And the joy in there eyes when
They saw the new boy king,

THE BOY AND HIS DRUM.

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Tony Taylor21 December 2021, 09:38

Wow!! GREG!!.....I found a rhythmic flow to this after reading it through a couple of times that isn't recognizable with just one read....but once you find it this piece comes alive with the free flowing love of the holiday season!!......such a beautiful idea for a poem Greg!!.......ALL STARS! & PINNED!!.....well done dear poet brother!!......Lots of Love and Merry Christmas to you!!........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )

Greg Etsell21 December 2021, 09:59

THANK you Tony
and merry christmas
to you

Marion21 December 2021, 11:23

Utterly utterly beautiful Greg!!! A perfect Christmas write x

Greg Etsell21 December 2021, 11:25

Thank you Marion
funny this took me three days
To write frustrated over three days because it didn’t come out the way I wanted to do
ripping up and throwing away
and this morning very early getting it up and riding it Here on the passion of poetry I’m very tired

Gwendoline22 December 2021, 04:50

Stunning Greg, a truly beautiful tribute to the meaning of Christmas and that little drummer boy x

Greg Etsell23 December 2021, 23:59

Thank you Gwendoline
merry Christmas 🎁🎄

Leah Yodico23 December 2021, 23:08

Great write Greg; Merry Christmas

Greg Etsell23 December 2021, 23:59

Thank you Leah
merry Christmas 🎁🎄

Larry Ran25 December 2021, 06:34

Our dear Friend Greg,

How lovely you have alluded to in your own words, "The Little Drummer Boy". As we all now sit in fear of this horrible pandemic, it is so nice to escape reality for a while, and lose ourselves in beautiful writings like this.
Have a merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx