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The Breeze

The Breeze

The ocean around that island
where she lived seldom calmed down.
The island itself was almost never visible
to any living eye, except perhaps
to those November birds on their way to winters.
It was always misted over with fine salt spray.
 
It was a tiny island of sand,
a little patch of grassy earth and
that old, twisted and gnarled oak,
which had no reason to be there, but still was!
She was thankful for it though,
for its branches were her home.
 
Every morning she would leave just at dawn
to visit the little kids on an island a few hours away.
Just for a few minutes she remained there
basking and warming in the midday sun,
before she turned and returned
back to her own oak, her own island.
 
It seldom rained where the kids lived,
but every day they smelt its hope in those minutes.
For every day, the breeze would collect
the heady petrichor off her salt dampened
patch of grassy oaken earth, and fly it across
those ocean hours, as a beacon of a promise to be kept.

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Lorna

Ahh Sambit, You are not only a fine poet but a fantastic storyteller. The wording in this prose really draws you into the tale engulfing all of the senses as you read. 
Thanks for sharing this
Lorna :D x

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Sambit Kumar Pradhan

And you really are very kind and generous Lorna! Am grateful and humbled.
Shukriya so much! :-)

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sparrowsong

Hello Sambit...

Namaste...

Very beautiful and peaceful...

For a moment I felt as if I were there...

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong
 

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Sambit Kumar Pradhan

Shukriya so very much for your time, your generosity and of course the hugs Sparrow! Hugs to you too! :)

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Jason Brown

So simple a story...so pregnant with significance; beautifully and deftly evoked through imagery which ingeniously recommends itself to all of the senses.

Absolutely exquisite...

J ;)

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Sambit Kumar Pradhan

Shukriya Jason, for such a generous and exquisitely phrased review of my humble words. Sincerely appreciated! :-)

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