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The Briny Deep

The Briny Deep

Trawling flounder in briny breadth,
Piscator rocked in murky squall,
Saturated, spume, short of breath,
Cast about sporadic and sprawl.

Darkness looms beneath the waves,
Battered hull unnerves the men,
Cowering midst splintered mast and lave,
Rapacious scourge strikes again.

Tumult cries midst tempest black,
​​​​​​Jagged teeth sink into the hull,
collasal shark looking for a tasty snack,
Cruor efferevess betwixt the cull.

Damning sight of cadaver adrift,
Foundering vessel in quick demise,
Lonely trawler tragically blitzed,
Watery graves with no "here lies".....
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Challenge accepted from poetessdarkly.

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Simon Bromley

Thank you Lisa.Β  You got me working hard lol.Β  I now challenge you to a vampire verse lolΒ 

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Marion

Well IV come to read your vampire challenge poem??? which we have all done...lol...get posting???

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Simon Bromley

Lol was wondering what to write next! Ok challenge accepted I'll work on it nowΒ 

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Marion

Lol...it was your challenge to Lisa in the beginning ???

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Simon Bromley

I know I got lost lol.Β  Vampire poem called slain now posted ?

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Being Me

Wow! Intense writing, Simon. VERY well done ???? x

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Katina Woodruff...

I loved the language! Okay, this is my 2nd poem I have read by you and I'm already a fan! It's how you incorporate these words into the poem.

Favorite lines;Β 

Darkness looms beneath the waves,
Battered hull un0nerves the men,

Great job!Β 

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