Poem -
THE CATS AMONG THE PIGEONS
THE BELLS WILL RING
THE CHILDREN WILL
SING THERE CHRISTMAS
CAROLS AND THE PRIEST
WILL SAY THEIR PRAYERS
IN THE SQUARE WHERE
THE CATS AND THE PIGEONS
PLAY THERE SILLY GAMES,
ON CHILLY NIGHTS WHEN
THE WIND BLOWS THE
LEAVES FROM THE EAVES
FROM THE CHURCH WHERE
THE PIGEONS PERCH
IN THE SQUARE THE CRISTMAS
TREE LIGHTS UP THE NIGHT
OH WHAT SIGHT
AND THE CATS
AND THE PIGEONS PLAY
THERE SILLY GAMES.
FROM THE FLAMES OF THE
CANDLES IN THE CHURCH
WHERE THE PIGEONS
PERCH WHERE THE
CATS WILL LURCH OUT
AT THE PIGEONS IN FUN
THE CATS AMONG THE PIGEONS,
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Greg yet another splendid write you have accomplished , I really could visualize this going on as you have an amazing ability to create such imagery! Kudos to a great poem ~Rob
thank you Rob!!!!
i just finished it
Your welcome Greg, it read lovely my friend .
Spelling is ok but the grammar lacks, you need to read this & whenever u need a rest put comma or .. in it xx
i am going to redo this poem agin
Hi Greg, I think your imagery just gets better and better. This has a lot of atmosphere to it. You convey an eerie scene that could even be symbolic in its meaning. Absolutely LOVE your poetry
I think the use of capitalisation adds to the feel of this write really well
Gwen x
thank you i changed
it the way you told me
i hope its ok now
Greg, this is lovely. This has a christmas feel but there is a lot of action in here too. This has to be one of my favourites out of your poems x
Thank you Tina this means a lot to me
Awww you are more than welcome xx
Excellent write Greg...you remind us here in this lovely Xmas scene that real life plays out in the same old way. I saw my own cats in the image you have painted...hugs x
Thank you Marion
A standout write Greg and a real pearler of Christmas and foreboding scenery threaded throughout.
Great and bold imagery cleverly balanced and displayed a superb read and poem all in one.
Thanks Greg for sharing and I wish you well.
Full respected honours as well and deserving.
Thank you so much shaun
Greg I know it's been a while and just let Jill know from Wednesday onwards I can turn the catch up screw and view many more.
Yes you’ve been away a long time we all miss you
I love the imagery . Nice
Happy Christmas
Thank you Leah merry Christmas to you as well
who would want to be a pigeon these days, it's not like it was back in the day .. an interesting post Greg .. made me think of foggy days, half light & being surrounded by grey ................................... Neville
I am not a big fan of pigeons myself but this poem came to me watching a Agatha Christie show and the name of the show was called the cats among the pigeons but it wasn’t about Cats and pigeons somebody
Somebody got murdered and I had to solve the case but I like the title
I like the title too :)
👍
Interesting topic chosen producing an interesting read. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you.
Thank you Richard
I think it’s an interesting title to
I was watching Agatha Christie
The name of the show was cats among the pigeons but of course it has nothing to do with cats or pigeons Somebody got murdered
You take inspiration to write from many sources. :)
Greg, my friend loved this poem, great use of imagery. Brilliant metaphors used to craft this amazing poem xxxxx
Thank you I am haveing awesome day