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THE CIMMERIAN FIELD

I stood before a boundless field,
Bleak and stark under a brooding sky,
The shifting clouds sometimes revealed,
A crow, circling on high.

A gentle breeze whispered there,
Only heard by hearts that grieve,
Agitating the acrid air,
Stirring the fallen leaves.

A sense of dread pervaded my soul,
A primal fear from deep within,
The time is nigh to pay the toll,
For every mortal sin.

Then at once I felt a chill,
As I crossed the threshold of the field,
The beating of my heart went still,
Every scar unheald. 

A final memory flashed through my mind,
As I passed  over to the other side,
Of everything I left behind,
In the time before I died,
The time before I died. 
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Interesting perspective! Love introspective! Nice write!........................Jim

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al Bikaadi

Fantastic write on a taboo perspective. Loved it! 

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Peter

Thank you very much 

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Being Me

Oh...I almost missed this
..soooo glad I didn't. This has brilliant imagery and "mood" .  Love this!  Pinned! x

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Peter

Thank you so much for your kind appraisal ☺

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