THE DAY FALSE LOVE DIED
Perished is the day that I met you
Gone is the feelings that I cared
My heart of love was filled with sadnessÂ
My desire for you took flight like lightningÂ
And dwelled where eagles dareÂ
With you, I've watched my starry skyÂ
Faded into a blanket of darknessÂ
Gentle breeze became enraged at your voiceÂ
The elements disturbed by your presenceÂ
Angry, at your deceitfulness to my love
You've trampled that which was sacred
A heart that loved you so
Hands that held you with compassionÂ
You've left empty with a broken soulÂ
It's no surprise that you've driftedÂ
You've always had wondering eyesÂ
But my heart and soul was resurrectedÂ
On the day your false love died.
Wilford BarkerÂ
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Wilfred this is some write indeed.Â
Such epic ink here. Beautifully worded and packed with emotion. I think we all have felt this at one time. A powerful poemÂ
GwenÂ
Hello Gwendoline..
writing from experience is so easy..
But life marches on.
thank you for reading my thoughts.
I agree with Gwendoline such a strong and convicting ending that screams confidence coming out of a heartbreak by true reflection of the circumstances. What a write and such strong comparisons !Â
Your kindness is much appreciated my friend..
At times I visit Cosmofunnel just to give an encouraging word.
it goes a long way.
Thanks again Shallow Waters.
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Anytime my friend as your style and raw emotion you ink is always a pleasure to read and comment on .Â
This hit on a whole other level, wow :,)
Pia..Â
Thank u very much for your comment.