Poem -
The Days That I Cry In My Shadow
The days that I cry in my shadow I will never forget
The days that I weep, no, the days that I wept
The sadness inside me shall never pass
The one that I experience through every class
The shadow that looms over me each and every day
Torments me to my soul in each and every way
Though I do nothing about my shadow still
But bending and moving to its every will
The days that I cry in my shadow I will never forget
The days that I weep, no, the days that I wept
These are days that my shadow is strongest
Which causes my tears to hold out the longest
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Comments
Stunningly effective write which can only touch the heart of the reader.
Refined confident and eloquent poetry. Great.
Warmest wishes to you. Â :)
Thank you very much, I was written from my soul.
Btw, Richard, I see a comment from you in almost every poem I read, are you looking for something perhaps?
Thank you for sharing your poetry !
I enjoy commenting on work because positive feedback to the poet or writer encourages them to continue in this craft. The longer you do something and the more practice you have the more accomplished you become !
I have decided to take a break from writing at present due to producing so much in such a short time and see what others are creating. There are some excellent poets on here I wish to read.
Wishing you all the best ! :)