Poem -
The 'Devil' at Work
Treacherous knows my name
implies that one's insane
Arrogance holds the game
seeking truth be lame
Weakness cries the same
injustice put to shame
Enlightenment is pure aim
that Devil's work be tame
Scandal winner in fame
Satan's mate fans the flame
Truth to see never the twainΒ
left flying a wingless plane
Honour weeps in disdain
at sight of endless blood stain
Twisted key for unlock-able chain
minds crack in mental pain
Hit with evils continuous cane
can as one destroy cruel reign?
Witness 'Devil' at work be slain
shipped out on a ethical train
Integrity taking total Β blame
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Comments
Great use of strong short lines to produce this dark piece Wendy. Fine example of monorhyme to get your points across.
Regards Mick.
Thanks Mizzy don't forget to vote by touching the five stars make them go orange lol x
Hey WENDY!!... I'll bet this was fun working out this rhyme scheme...... great work.......... a truly compelling piece!!........ALL STARS!!...... well done!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Β ?β³β΄β
Thanks Tony yes was good to write did'nt know when to stop rhyming x
Gorgeous ink Wendy. Very cool rhyme!
Thanks Lisa need to catch up on your great poems x
Hi Wendy Great write the rhyming superbΒ
A compelling piece from beginning to endΒ
Best wishes Debs xx
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Thanks Debs this was inspired by someone been nasty at work to me , always appreciate your comments x