THE DOOR TO MY INNER MIND AND SOUL
I stand at this door to my inner mind and soul and wonder what is behind it I hear music that is soft very odd sounding, I hear soft voices that say come in,SUDDENLY!!! the door opens and black figure grads my arm and drags me in and down I see evil demons along the way thay try to touch me but pull away the music gets louder my heart begins to beat faster then SUDDNLY!! the black figure stops and points to my right I see a white light with dark figure far off cant make out what is,i try to run back to the door but I am stop by the black figure he pulls me down even more and then stops and points to my left I see a red light with red figure I pull away and run back to the door along the way I see dead trees evil demons who try to touch me my heart is beating faster I get to the door and I go thougth and I close the door and run to outer mind and soul where I know I will be safe,the door to my inner mind and soul will always make wonder what the smell was no other smell that is like it, for now I am safe I wil never go to my inner mind and soul agin it is to dark and evil,the door to my inner mind and soul.
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cool write linda
thank you Linda
Hello Greg, this was a very interesting read.
You know everyone has that darkness within themselves. I liked how you wrote this work.
♡M
thank you Manon yes every writer has that dark side as long as you don't go there to much then your ok thanks for reading peace and love to you ooxx
It was a pleasure to read your piece.
♡M
Hi Greg, very interesting piece and touching!! The other side of our inner soul ; the dark side!!
Thank you Leah yes it can be touching thank you for reading peace and love you xxoo must be late where you live
Dear Greg,
You have just created a masterpiece, your crowning achievement thus far. You have taken your readers on a scary journey to the inner sanctums which we all fear. We tend to protect ourselves and not delve into the depths of our soul. When we do, as your beautiful words have so stunningly illustrated, it can be like an amusement ride that we took as children, through the "House of Horrors". However, I feel that sometimes it is worth the terror, to enter in and possibly purge some of our darkest inhibitions. We need more writes like this from you, our Dear Greg.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry this poem I was inspired by Tonys poem daddys room not the poem but the door he on the poem I didn't read his poem intill I wrote mine then I went and read Tony poem daddys room I got say what poem so I told Tony about it I haven't hread from him but mybe I will thank you so much for reading I don't know if or when I will write one like it but if I get inspired agin I could happen
I think we al have those dark figures lurking around the corner of our souls...You did a fine job with this Greg...Well done
Thank you Rose yes we all do thank you fro reading
Nice poem Greg I could relate to it and I'm sure that lots of other people can relate to it also.
Hi Paolo thank you yas we all can relatate to it thanks for reading
❝...door opens and black figure [grads] grabs my arm and drags me in and down I see evil demons along the way [thay] they try to touch me but pull away the music gets louder my heart begins to beat faster then [SUDDNLY] SUDDENLY!!❞ ... Just a few minor typos here, Greg. Nothing major...
We ALL have a dark side, although some will never admit to that.
We are like the cycles of a day—daylight and darkness. One cannot exist without the other.
Nice write, Greg...
~Dean ☠
thank you Dean I was inspired by one of Tonys poems that had the same door his poem was more about his childhood
You're very welcome, Greg.
Take care,
~Dean :}