The Field Mice (Love In The Garden)
"I love you Kate!", said the field mouse at the gate,
and rubbed noses with his newfound mate.
Then off into the night he dreamed they would unite
in this mystical garden's rite
of marriages.
Where love did bloom, for fancy mice bedrooms
were made, of dreams, come true.
The path of pumpkin seeds led through the garden's reeds
and its grassy simplicity.
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"I love you Kate!", said the field mouse at the gate,
and recalled their very first date.
Where they gave human presents, to the oldest descendants
to show loving sentiment
to all that could see, that the intent was in living free
here, in this garden of rarity.
For it was here that life was magical, and food so plentiful
that love was beautifully bountiful.
And so,
skipping freely, through flowers, with Mr. McNeely
Kate did submit to 'touchy feely'
And to a life through the gate, where life did equate
to a love filled with flowers
forever...
Tony Taylor
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nice mystical like it linda j write happily ever after lol
Thanx LINDA!!...... smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Transportation to childwonderland! What a magical journey! And a perfect read for adults and children who still look for secret magic hidden within gardens and hedgerows."Where love did bloom, for fancy mice bedrooms,were made, of dreams, come true"....gentle, lovely and heartwarming...I need a cup of hot chocolate topped with cream and a hobnob biscuit after that..heaven!!!!! Inspired work my brother, inspired!!!!
Lodigiana xxx
Yay!!...VERY cool comment LÔDIGIANA!!...I can see you with your hot chocolate & 'whatever' a 'hobnob' biscuit might be?!.....thanx so much for jut being you dear soul!!..... much appreciated!!..... Kings to you dear poet!!..... smiles......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Hello Tony...
This is so adorable...
I was thinking of reading this to my Granddaughter and tell her love is for mice and they're 65 years old and retired...
When you're 65 years old you can find it too...
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Great write!
Love this!
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Wow FEATHERS!!..... you do me honor my friend..... reading this to your Granddaughter ~ truly, made my day here!!..... not quite sure about the retired aspect.... but if they're 65 and still 'touchy feely' then it's all good with me!!!!...... smiles.....thanx so much dear poet sister!!.....T xo ?✳✴☀♥
Lovely magical poem Tony.
Thanx JOHN !!!!.....so glad you enjoyed my friend!!..... big smiles!!...T xo ?✳✴☀?
Oh my Tony, I LOVE this!! It's so sweet and endearing. I will be ready this many more times xxxx
Yay!!....Thanx LUCY!!.... so good to hear from you my friend!!..... just the idea that you enjoyed it enough to want to read it again.... is enough to float my boat for the next several hours.... big smiles!!....??✳✴☀?
Delightful poem, brought a rare smile to me.
This is this is so pretty,it should be a child’s book.Beautiful.