Poem -
THE FLOWERS IN MY LIFE
I walk along the road and see
the flowers in my life the
rose are red the violiets
are blue and I love the
lilies in the field and the
purple lilac in the garden
and a girl that walks by
with sunflowers in her hand
with a smile on her face as she walks
in place with such grace
I love the flowers in my life,the
tulips and the daffodils are so
wonderful and when the sky
is blue and sunshines on
the flowers in my life and
then my life is so complete
with peace in my heart
that I hope will never part
the flowers in my life
Like 6 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
This is a wonderful example of "unique-format." It read like one long beautiful sentence. Bravo! Well done. You painted a portrait of a garden and all that a garden in life encompasses -- new life, new species, color, texture and how to live in the beauty of the moment of writing.
Favorite Part:
thank you so much Katina
this means lot to me that you love my
poem and thank you so much
for pinning my poem wow
every day I go out walking
and that is where I can come
up with most of my poems
thank so much agin and the girl
in the poem walked past my house yesterday
with 3 sunflowers in her hand I couldn't beleve it
That's awesome. I miss spring! I cannot wait until the dill has grown to three foot and the red tomatoes are enormous, to watch a baby wren learn to fly for the first time, or catch a glimpse of a blue jay mimicking a Red Shouldered Hawk. I find nature to be the best source of inspiration.
Keep writing & I'll keep reading.
My Dear Greg,
Beautiful poem. I give you a Haiku in response.
Flowers in my life
Scent my loving heart and Soul
With essence of all
All my love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry
Awww so many beautiful flowers Greg Well done giving me that wonderful colourful imagery xxx
thank you Jill
Aww you so welcome my friend xxx
I love flowers made me want to get out in my yard and plant some. This yard where I stay is so full It needs some vibrant colors. You got me to thinkin'
thank you for the lovely write.
Violet
thank you Voilet your welcome
I hope you do plant
flowers if you do take photo
and do poem if you want
Catching up...don't know how IV missed so many of yours my friend...blame Xmas! This is fabulous Greg...enjoyed the read ?
thank you xmas is always busy
time