The Fog

Water droplets giving life to the fog.
A swirling, motherless opaque ghost-grey mist,
slowly rolling with the sea breeze following.
Mystic, noiseless, silence pervades the open plains,
Whilst, mirage like ,it creeps relentlessly and menacingly, Β towards theΒ arboreous sentinels Β
guarding the entrance to theΒ forest.
Sentinals Β oblivious Β of the invasion approaching,
languidly droop their branches in their windless stasis.
Like a viperous enemy it begins its furtive writhing unchallenged,up the guardians woody base .
Itβs spineless tentacles coiling, slowly Β around the stocky Β oaks.
Squirrels scrambling up the mangled, knotty tree barks
to find sanctuary within the slowly disappearing foliage.
Climbing ever higher through the mist, until reaching the treetops
they bathe in the last remnants of the watery autumn sun,
and looking down, see the sea of cloud creating a Β new carpet in the forest.
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Comments
Such a wonderfully descriptive poem! It epitomises what good poetry is all about..Love it!Β
Lodigiana xx
I am flattered by your comments and thrilled! thank youΒ so much
This is absolutely STELLAR imagery created by VERY well crafted phrasing!!.... can just see the fog come creeping in!!.....ALL STARS!!..... great word choices here!!...... high fives STEVIE C!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?β³β΄β₯β?β₯???
Hi Tony, So pleased that you enjoyed it and very appreciative of your constructive and positive comments- thank you my friend!
The imagery and phrasing is top quality here!
very impressive,this is why I don't call myself a poet,a lot of brilliant writers here and you are up there with the best of them!
Thanks so much Keith! thats a really generous critiqueΒ and really appreciated..and I have been reading your work and you understimate yourself..you are a force to be reckoned with sir!!!Β Thanks again !
Well deserved,super poem!