THE GHOST OF THE MOORS
Like 10 Pin it 4I WAS WALKING IN THEÂ
MOORS A BEAUTIFUL
DAY SOME CLOUDSÂ
AND THE SKY WAS BLUE
A LIGHT BREEZE A COOL DAY
THE SUN WAS BRIGHT ANDÂ
WARM JUST A LOVELY DAY
I WOULD SAY AND AS I WALKEDÂ
AND WALKED NOTHING MATTER
AND NOT NEEN A CHATTER I COULDÂ
HEAR AND THEN I CAME UPON
A BEACH AND SAT DOWNÂ
LOOKING DOWN IN VALLEYÂ
WATCHING BIRDS FLYINGÂ
AND SHEEP EATING ALL
OFÂ SUDDEN!!!!! THE FOGÂ
CAME IN AND IT WASÂ
THICK AND HEAVYÂ
AND THEN IT STOP
AND OUT THE FOG
CAME MAN DRESSED OLD
CLOTHING AND WALKS UPÂ
TO ME AND SHAKES A FINGER
ATÂ ME AND SAY BE GOOD YOUNGÂ
MAN AND THEN WALKS BACK
TO THE FOG AND TURNS AROND
AND WAVES AND WALKS IN TO
THE FOG AND THEN THE FOG
WAS GONEÂ
THE GHOST OF THE MOORS
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Ooh I pictured this eerily spooky grey ghostly apparition Greg Brilliant tale đ±đ»đ
thank you Jill i had that visionÂ
of him coming out of the fogÂ
Awww spooky vision đ»đ±đ
Greg....atmospheric. I adore atmospheric writes...great stuff xx
thank you MarionÂ
Goosebumps moment Greg :) I loved it x
Thank you GwendolineÂ
i love ghost storysÂ
Me too. Love a good chill to the bones :)Â
Hey Greg..
i am happy to pay for this trip man.
kinda dig the spooky end...
never saw it coming..
be blessed.
thank you Wilford
Very entertaining read and loved the ending .Â
thank you Rob
cool poem!....................................................................................Jim
thank you JimÂ
This sounds really eary Greg. I hope it wasn't based on a true experience, I'd have been terrified. Nicely written.
Take care - SydÂ
Thank you syd no it never happened just in my imagination onlyÂ
Greg you had me on the word ghost and your poem drips a chilling and memorable atmosphere of the highest and densest order.
 Thanks Greg and a great ethereal theme and poem that lingers after reading.
Thank you shaun
I dont know how I managed to miss this one until now Greg .. its got everything a thrill seeker looks for in a post of this kind .. Made even spookier because I live on Exmoor a real live moor in deepest darkest West Somerset, England ............................................................ Neville :)
Thank you sounds like an awesome place you live in someday Iâm coming back to England I did have before and really loved itÂ
I sincerely hope you do Greg & thank you again ... N:)