Poem -
THE GHOST OF THE MOORS
Like 10 Pin it 4I WAS WALKING IN THE
MOORS A BEAUTIFUL
DAY SOME CLOUDS
AND THE SKY WAS BLUE
A LIGHT BREEZE A COOL DAY
THE SUN WAS BRIGHT AND
WARM JUST A LOVELY DAY
I WOULD SAY AND AS I WALKED
AND WALKED NOTHING MATTER
AND NOT NEEN A CHATTER I COULD
HEAR AND THEN I CAME UPON
A BEACH AND SAT DOWN
LOOKING DOWN IN VALLEY
WATCHING BIRDS FLYING
AND SHEEP EATING ALL
OF SUDDEN!!!!! THE FOG
CAME IN AND IT WAS
THICK AND HEAVY
AND THEN IT STOP
AND OUT THE FOG
CAME MAN DRESSED OLD
CLOTHING AND WALKS UP
TO ME AND SHAKES A FINGER
AT ME AND SAY BE GOOD YOUNG
MAN AND THEN WALKS BACK
TO THE FOG AND TURNS AROND
AND WAVES AND WALKS IN TO
THE FOG AND THEN THE FOG
WAS GONE
THE GHOST OF THE MOORS
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Comments
Ooh I pictured this eerily spooky grey ghostly apparition Greg Brilliant tale 😱👻💙
thank you Jill i had that vision
of him coming out of the fog
Awww spooky vision 👻😱💙
Greg....atmospheric. I adore atmospheric writes...great stuff xx
thank you Marion
Goosebumps moment Greg :) I loved it x
Thank you Gwendoline
i love ghost storys
Me too. Love a good chill to the bones :)
Hey Greg..
i am happy to pay for this trip man.
kinda dig the spooky end...
never saw it coming..
be blessed.
thank you Wilford
Very entertaining read and loved the ending .
thank you Rob
cool poem!....................................................................................Jim
thank you Jim
This sounds really eary Greg. I hope it wasn't based on a true experience, I'd have been terrified. Nicely written.
Take care - Syd
Thank you syd no it never happened just in my imagination only
Greg you had me on the word ghost and your poem drips a chilling and memorable atmosphere of the highest and densest order.
Thanks Greg and a great ethereal theme and poem that lingers after reading.
Thank you shaun
I dont know how I managed to miss this one until now Greg .. its got everything a thrill seeker looks for in a post of this kind .. Made even spookier because I live on Exmoor a real live moor in deepest darkest West Somerset, England ............................................................ Neville :)
Thank you sounds like an awesome place you live in someday I’m coming back to England I did have before and really loved it
I sincerely hope you do Greg & thank you again ... N:)