Poem - 08 March 2021, 08:14

THE GHOST SHIP

In the mist of the night
200 years ago
Out at sea was captain
Drinking tea with this
2 lovely daughters
When all SUDDEN!!!!!
Over the waters came
A storm it rained and it
was windy and his 2
Daughters cried
and then sang a lullaby and the
Captain drank wine before
they sank in to the sea
Every year since that
Night when ever there was
storm you can hear the
2 little girls CRYING
And singing there lullaby
On the THE GHOST SHIP

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Ghost Ship

Poetry Genre:

Tragedy

Topic:

Afterlife

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Jill Tait08 March 2021, 08:18

Awww lovely imaginative thoughts there & wow at that ghost ship picture too I love it all Greg 💕💙💕

Greg Etsell08 March 2021, 08:22

thank you the photo
i thougth this one or
the photo you had of
the 2 girls that was in your poem
so i went with this photo
i like this poem

Tony Taylor08 March 2021, 12:15

Love this GREG!! (not gregory)...it's a VERY creative tale.....and it actually has some basis in truth for there are many "old tales" of ships and shipwrecks that have similar intent.....But you've created a home for them all here brother!!......ALL STARS!!.....High Fives!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )

Greg Etsell08 March 2021, 12:17

thank you Tony
i love this tale

Shaun Cronick14 March 2021, 15:43

Greg, thanks for writing and sharing this, I love reading a creepy haunting one and if it's about a ghost ship then doubly so.
A well written tale with a great and tragic payoff, the way all haunting tales should tell.
Five stars and pinned for a reread on a cold stormy night.
Thanks again Greg and I wish you well sir.

Greg Etsell14 March 2021, 15:46

wow i am so honored
you like
my poems it
means lot