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THE GHOST SHIP

THE GHOST SHIP

In the mist of theĀ  night
200 years agoĀ 
Out at sea was captainĀ 
Drinking tea withĀ  thisĀ 
2 lovely daughtersĀ 
When all SUDDEN!!!!!Ā 
Over the waters cameĀ 
A storm it rained and itĀ 
was windy and his 2Ā 
Daughters criedĀ 
and then sang a lullaby and the
Captain drank wine before
they sank in to the seaĀ 
Every year since thatĀ 
Night when ever there wasĀ 
storm you can hear theĀ Ā 
2 little girls CRYINGĀ 
And singing there lullabyĀ 
On the THE GHOST SHIP

Ā 

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Jill Tait

Awww lovely imaginative thoughts there & wow at that ghost ship picture too I love it all Greg šŸ’•šŸ’™šŸ’•

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Greg Etsell

thank you the photoĀ 
i thougth this one or
the photo you had ofĀ 
the 2 girls that was in your poemĀ 
so i went with this photoĀ Ā 
i like this poemĀ 

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Tony Taylor

Love this GREG!! (not gregory)...it's a VERY creative tale.....and it actually has some basis in truth for there are many "old tales" of ships and shipwrecks that have similar intent.....But you've created a home for them all here brother!!......ALL STARS!!.....High Fives!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ  : )

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Greg Etsell

thank you TonyĀ 
i love this taleĀ 
Ā 

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Shaun Cronick

Greg, thanks for writing and sharing this, I love reading a creepy haunting one and if it's about a ghost ship then doubly so.
A well written tale with a great and tragic payoff, the way all haunting tales should tell.
Five stars and pinned for a reread on a cold stormy night.
Thanks again Greg and I wish you well sir.
Ā 

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Greg Etsell

wow i am so honoredĀ 
you likeĀ 
my poems itĀ 
means lotĀ 

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