The girl who looks like me

I saw that girl again today.
I think she saw me too.
Bruises covered her beautiful face
Dear God, what can I do.
I think she looks alot like me,
I want to be her friend,
With love, care, and gentle kindness,
Broken bones will mend.
Lord, I am afraid for her,
And all I can do is pray.
I stay up nights thinking of her
Knowing soon it will be too late.
Dear God, do you hear my prayers?
Her fear has become my own.
In my desperate attempts to save her,
Lord, I fear I am alone.
Dear God, I did not see her today,
For I am sick in bed.
But please answer this prayer I say
The last one too be said.
Deliver her from her pain.
Take her into your loving arms.
Heal her brokenness and sorrow
Let not one more hand cause her harm
The next day flowers were placed for her
Not one more day will the mirror see,
The pain and sorrow in the familiar eyes
Of the girl in the glass staring back at me.
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Comments
Could feel the anguish and sorrow, well written.
Thank you so much.
Last line defines.
Indeed.
Hi NevadaBrat Your poem is heartfelt I can relate
to the story the sorrow and pain felt
It is very well written well thought through
For me a Great write
Welcome to Cosmo look forward to reading
more of your work
Best wishes Debs
Thankyou Deb, I appreciate your enthusiasm, I'll definitely keep writing!
Thankyou Deb, this poem came from my experience, it's about disassociation disorder in severe abuse. Often when things get really bad we refuse to believe it's really happening, we disassociate our selves w reality, I remember looking in the mirror And not seeing me. This poem was inspired from that moment...
Thankyou all for enjoying and seeing the feeling and emotion
Very Well Written!! Poem Is Very In Depth and Paints A Clear Image!! Very Nicely Done!!
I love the ending, so clever, I can relate to this too. Listen to concrete angel that is about a child being abused, it's a lovely song, I loved your words, it got to me a lot.