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The girl who looks like me

The girl who looks like me

I saw that girl again today.

I think she saw me too.

Bruises covered her beautiful face

Dear God, what can I do.

I think she looks alot like me,

I want to be her friend,

With love, care, and gentle kindness,

Broken bones will mend.

Lord, I am afraid for her,

And all I can do is pray.

I stay up nights thinking of her

Knowing soon it will be too late.

Dear God, do you hear my prayers?

Her fear has become my own.

In my desperate attempts to save her,

Lord, I fear I am alone.

Dear God, I did not see her today,

For I am sick in bed.

But please answer this prayer I say

The last one too be said.

Deliver her from her pain.

Take her into your loving arms.

Heal her brokenness and sorrow

Let not one more hand cause her harm

The next day flowers were placed for her

Not one more day will the mirror see,

The pain and sorrow in the familiar eyes 

Of the girl in the glass staring back at me.

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The Bee

Could feel the anguish and sorrow, well written.

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Deborah Evans

Hi NevadaBrat Your poem is heartfelt I can relate 
to the story the sorrow and pain felt 
It is very well written well thought through
For me a Great write 
Welcome to Cosmo look forward to reading 
more of your work
Best wishes Debs
 

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NevadaBrat

Thankyou Deb, I appreciate your enthusiasm, I'll definitely keep writing!

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NevadaBrat

Thankyou Deb, this poem came from my experience, it's about disassociation disorder in severe abuse. Often when things get really bad we refuse to believe it's really happening, we disassociate our selves w reality, I remember looking in the mirror And not seeing me. This poem was inspired from that moment...

Thankyou all for enjoying and seeing the feeling and emotion

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Damisha Merchant

Very Well Written!! Poem Is Very In Depth and Paints A Clear Image!! Very Nicely Done!!

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Kathleen Rostron

I love the ending, so clever, I can relate to this too. Listen to concrete angel that is about a child being abused, it's a lovely song, I loved your words, it got to me a lot. 

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