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The happy little cloud

The happy little cloud

The happy little cloud was floating in the sky and came to happyville,
looks like a nice town when all
Of a SUDDENLY!!!! He see a house on FIRE!!!  and the happy little cloud see children in the house So the happy little cloud rained on the house and puts the fire out and the children 
Were saved, The firemen and police man look up and waved and thank the happy little cloud,

The happy little cloud floating along in the sky over the woods SUDDENLY!!!
Sees a fire and the children are trapped the happy little cloud opens up in the middle and lets the Sunshine on the little children like a spotlight and the fireman and policeman save the children and The happy little cloud put out the fire The policeman and firemen look up and wave and thank the Happy little cloud,
As the happy little cloud floats off into the sunset the day ends in happyville.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

love happy endings!.............................................................Jim

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Greg Etsell

thank you Jim 
i just add a photo 

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Shaun Cronick

Greg I wholeheartedly agree with Jim's comment and this wonderful poem just shows how versatile poet and writer you are.
It's great to see other people's imagination on display and how they can write from one extreme to the other.
And this is one to email to my niece and that pic you have chosen is perfect.
Thanks for sharing Greg and full honours for writing a poem of warm light and colour and above all fun. 
Superb to read something different and full honours respectfully given. 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you so much Shaun That  you like this
and that you would send this to your Niece I am so honored that you do that thank you so much that means a lot to me

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Marion

Aw brilliant Greg...its like a fabulous children's story...xx

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Marion 
It is like a children’s story
it’s an old poem That I wrote back in 2016 just bringing it forward so I didn’t get lost

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Being Me

I so want go go to Happyville! This is a charming little story which should be published as a childrens story book. Fabulous x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tina 
this is old poem 
i wrote 5 years ago 
you think it could
be children book  
i dont know who send it to 
thanks for reading 

 

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Being Me

Greg, you can publish for free with Amazon. Not sure how you would do the pictures though...but I believe you can. Lulu also publishes. Do not go to a hybrid publisher though...they make their money from authors and not the stories. Try googling icecream and puppy tales...i think they are looking for potential childrens books. Best of luck with it x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tina I’ll look into Amazon 

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Greg Etsell

Tina Amazon publishing for Ebooks or kindle that you 
did 

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Being Me

I published a kindle version and also a paperback version. They are connected so you can do both or one ... your choice x

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Being Me

You are most very welcome x

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Gwendoline

Sorry I am late Greg, but what a cute little story that like Tina, I could see as a picture book for children. That happy little cloud has such a warm and friendly vibe to them. A wonderful story my friend x 

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Greg Etsell

thank you Gwendoline 
i will look in to it 

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Neville

   A delightful little tale told terribly well in my book .. Well in any book really .. and would sure make one helluva good kiddies book/bedtime story .. write on sir :)

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Neville

You are seriously more than merely welcome ......... N :)

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