The Hollywood porcelain doll

Windows of her soul gazing upon decades of high points an flaws until the flesh of perfection is disintergrated underneath a mask shelled as thick as a porcelain doll the fire of her lonilness burns Every angle of her soul as the interest of the world , fame, as well as beauty begins to fall will she be strong enough to keep going in spite of it all. Crying for sanity, peace, a source of compassion and release who will remember The Hollywood' porcelain doll when she is deceased
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Did you mean "disintegrated"??
Looking for comments not corrections I'm pretty sure you've misspelled a word or two when writing so no negative critizism is needed
Angela,
You haven't been here very long; Cosmofunnel is a very supportive and collegial site where people share their work and very little of the criticism is negative.
I hope you find whatever it is that you're looking for here.
Yea well so far I can't tellÂ