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THE JOURNEY OF A LEAF

I am a leaf on tree 
I danced in the sun light
when the wind blows
And then fall came
And i was never the
same i turned colors 
And fell to the ground
Then the wind blew
me all around then
I turned colors agin
I turned brown 
when i fell down 
And then the wind 
Blew me in to a drain
where i floated down
stream intill came to 
opening I layed there
Intill the sun came out 
dryed me out and the 
wind blew me down to 
To the river where floated 
Down stream when i hit
rock the sun came out dryed
me up the wind blew me on 
to road a car came long 
And blew on to another car 
we went to beach and the
wind blew me in to the 
ocean i floated and floated
And hit land 
THEJOURNEY OF LEAF

 
 

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linda lank

nicely written very creative good imagination fun to read Linda

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Greg Etsell

Part of this poem is an old poem from the get beginning  But I changed it just some of it to make it different 

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Jill Tait

Awww you were such an active leaf n pinned coz so creatively created ❤️?❤️

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Being Me

Hi Greg. This is a lovely poetic tale of a leaf. The places they end up! ? x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tina I left out some things in this poem that I went back and read and that I should’ve put in I may go back and put it in thanks for reading

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Marion

Wow Greg, loved this story of the journey if a leaf...fab my friend ?

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Marion there may be more to the story with this Leaf I made you another one where he’s all over Europe ha ha Ha

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Greg. Oh the poor leaf I mean what a journey. Very creative piece. Make you think how much a leave must see and go places...
Px?

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Pratibha I think there may be another poem about the leaf you never know where he’ll go

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Pratibha Savani

Aaahhh so very true....its endless...you could do mountains of poem on it or any other thing in nature! 

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Shaun Cronick

A great and most involving journey of a poem Greg and oh to be a leaf, so free and carefree.
A well written and well travelled poem you have thoughtfully shared and splendidly imagined and written.
And the title alone cries out to be read and one to enjoy as well.
Thanks  for writing and sharing your engaging and venturing poem.
Full honours deservedly given for bestowing something so small we see everyday in life and nature and we can sometimes miss or walk by.
For you see with better eyes than many others Greg

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Shaun I was thinking of writing
The journey of a leaf two 

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