THE JOURNEY OF A LEAF
I am a leaf on tree
I danced in the sun light
when the wind blows
And then fall came
And i was never the
same i turned colors
And fell to the ground
Then the wind blew
me all around then
I turned colors agin
I turned brown
when i fell down
And then the wind
Blew me in to a drain
where i floated down
stream intill came to
opening I layed there
Intill the sun came out
dryed me out and the
wind blew me down to
To the river where floated
Down stream when i hit
rock the sun came out dryed
me up the wind blew me on
to road a car came long
And blew on to another car
we went to beach and the
wind blew me in to the
ocean i floated and floated
And hit land
THEJOURNEY OF LEAF
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nicely written very creative good imagination fun to read Linda
Thank you Linda
Part of this poem is an old poem from the get beginning But I changed it just some of it to make it different
Awww you were such an active leaf n pinned coz so creatively created ❤️?❤️
Thank you Jill
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Hi Greg. This is a lovely poetic tale of a leaf. The places they end up! ? x
Thank you Tina I left out some things in this poem that I went back and read and that I should’ve put in I may go back and put it in thanks for reading
You are very welcome x
Wow Greg, loved this story of the journey if a leaf...fab my friend ?
Thank you Marion there may be more to the story with this Leaf I made you another one where he’s all over Europe ha ha Ha
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Hi Greg. Oh the poor leaf I mean what a journey. Very creative piece. Make you think how much a leave must see and go places...
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Thank you Pratibha I think there may be another poem about the leaf you never know where he’ll go
Aaahhh so very true....its endless...you could do mountains of poem on it or any other thing in nature!
I could yes Endless
A great and most involving journey of a poem Greg and oh to be a leaf, so free and carefree.
A well written and well travelled poem you have thoughtfully shared and splendidly imagined and written.
And the title alone cries out to be read and one to enjoy as well.
Thanks for writing and sharing your engaging and venturing poem.
Full honours deservedly given for bestowing something so small we see everyday in life and nature and we can sometimes miss or walk by.
For you see with better eyes than many others Greg
Thank you Shaun I was thinking of writing
The journey of a leaf two