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THE JOURNEY OF HIS FEET

THE JOURNEY  OF HIS  FEET

He walked through the desert
For Miles and saw many smiles
On faces in many places
The journey of his feet

As he walked over the waters
To the mountains where he sees
A bright light glowing  he can see
A flight of white birds flying in the Skies
The journey of his feet

As he walks up the mountain
In the moonlight soon the sun
Will rise in his eyes he can see the Cries  from the world
He stands on top holds out his arms And say thanks be to God 
The world will be saved and then he Sees all the smiles for miles
The journey of his feet.

 

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Marion

Absolutely cracking write Greg x

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Greg, 
Love this poem, what is the inspiration behind it? It has a powerful passion that pulls all in, creating a wonderful journey for the reader. 

Excellent x 

Sarfraz Ahmed 
Poet and Writer 

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Greg Etsell

Sarfraz thank you I don’t know where I got the inspiration for it I know the title for the poem came to me and I just went with it and wrote this poem I do love this poem

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Jim "The Lad" ....

cool write Greg!....................................................................................Jim

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Being Me

👌. Well done Greg!  Love this... It's one of your best I think. A super poem x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tina this means a lot to me that you like it thank you

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Shaun Cronick

Superb writing throughout and so evidently here on display, for any who choose to read, Greg.
Your writing grows from strength to strength, also your choice of themes and how you weave them into a poem with a captivating message to tell.
Said message is not lost on this reader.
Duty calls for now my friend but back later tonight to catch up.
Thank you for sharing and imagineering,full honours bestowed and deservedly so. 

 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Shaun 
happy Father’s Day
 

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Shaun Cronick

Thanks Greg and you too my friend.👌 
See and read more tonight.

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Neville

A captivating read throughout the entire journey it took me on .. Thank you Greg :)

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