Poem - 05 September 2016, 04:09

The Lady Of The Tree

Larry Ran

When I was just a young boy, of only eight years old;

I had a favorite place I played, with large trees so very bold!

It was “The United Theological Seminary”, with grounds that ran for miles;

It had oaks and elms and willow trees, so many different styles!

My favorite one was very old, with strong limbs that sturdy grew;

One of them hung very low, and I knew what I had do!

With arms outstretched, I clasped my hands, then swung my legs around;

And pulled myself on top of it, some feet above the ground!

Then I climbed up to a higher spot, a perfect perch to rest;

I was so darn very proud of myself, for I’d passed this little test!

That was the first time that I heard her voice, the “Lady of the Tree”;

In whispered tones from within her core, she spoke to only me!

She told me that someday real soon, I’d grow tall with limbs so strong;

And I’d not be climbing trees anymore, but I told her she was wrong!

She laughed and said “I hope you’re right”, then her willows began to weep;

For she knew someday, I’d not be back, that I’d have other “dates” to keep!

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Deborah Evans05 September 2016, 04:53

Hi Larry A Lovely lovely write of your
memories of your visit to the "The United Theological Seminary "
The the conversation you had and imagery of the "The Lady of the Tree" is gorgeous!
Very much enjoyed my friend, a pleasure to read
love n hugs Debs xox

Larry Ran05 September 2016, 07:26

Hi Dear Debs,

I went out on a limb for this one, and I'm so happy it pleased you. It kind of made me want to go climb a tree, instead of climbing the walls!

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Deborah Evans05 September 2016, 08:11

HAHA Larry we are all in a funny mood today you crack me up
in your comments out on a limb lol hugs Debs xo

Georgina Richardson05 September 2016, 05:43

Are you a tree hugger like me my Larry!??

I loved this one because Oaks are my favourite trees and we have some beautiful trees where we live. Well done sweetie, I loved the story of your little adventures. There is a massive Oak tree in Cheshire that`s the oldest tree in the country and is over 1000 years old!! Needless to say that it is very precious and protected.

Love G xx

Larry Ran05 September 2016, 07:32

Hi Dear G,

Actually, your comment from yesterday, when you talked about loving and hugging trees, somewhat inspired me to write this. In your comment, you mentioned the beautiful Redwood trees of California, and if you ever came to America you'd love to see them. Of course, your first stop in America has to be Florida, to see us. But maybe we could placate you with the beautiful Palm Trees, the many trees that have the hanging moss, and lastly, the most beautiful ones, the massive Banyon Trees. Anyways, so glad you liked the poem.

All our love,

Linda, Larry and Cody

Georgina Richardson09 October 2016, 03:48

Congratulations on winning the competition with this great piece, I`m proud of you sweetie.

I love you both

G xx

Rose Sho05 September 2016, 07:36

Hi Larry, Fell in love with this write most especially the rhyme. Thanks for sharing your experience with the lady of the tree. It's wonderful.

Larry Ran05 September 2016, 08:02

Hi Sweet Rose,

Thank you so much for your very kind words. I think we are rapidly becoming each others ardent fans.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

sparrowsong05 September 2016, 08:35

Hello Larry...

The moment I saw this picture...

The song from Pocohontas, Colors of the Wind came to me...

Who said we get to old to climb a tree and become one with nature?

Tree trimmers do it all the time...

Have you seen the faces in a cottonwood tree?

Some people say that talking to plants helps them grow...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

Larry Ran06 September 2016, 03:37

Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,

I guess I have to get back to climbing trees, and quit climbing the walls. Thank you for your lovely insight and compliments on my poem.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Tony Taylor05 September 2016, 09:36

Hey LARRY!!.... what a wonderful, fairy-tale-like poem....... it even made me envious of the fact that you were able to spend time at "The United Theological Seminary"...... the kind of place where magical things occur...... and epiphany's abound........ this was such a COMPELLING narrative.......BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!....... had to PIN this piece for its impactful story telling qualities!!........LOVED IT!!....... well crafted brother poet!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo

Larry Ran06 September 2016, 03:47

Hi Dear Brother Poet Tony,

Wow! Your telling me that you are going to pin my poem is to me, is like someone putting a gold medal around my neck. Just thought you would like to know that they were very kind to us kids at "The Seminary" and allowed us to play ping pong etc., in their rec room. There were also two baseball diamonds and a football field, which they graciously said we could use. The grounds were only one block from my house, and it was the greatest play area that a youth could ever dream of. Thank you again, oh exalted one!

Peace, Love and Rockets,

xox Larry

Jai Masters01 October 2016, 16:58

Poets tell stories and create imagery,

this poem exemplifies the art form,

I say well done! Indeed a gold medal

be proud like the tree you write of;

your branches are strong and you

bring oxygen to the readers of life,

pinned and framed!

LuV Jai:)

Larry Ran02 October 2016, 03:44

My Dear Brother Poet Jai,

This is one of the most beautiful comments I have ever received! The "bringing oxygen to the readers of life", is priceless. I cannot find words powerful enough to portray the joy you have brought my heart.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Christopher Correia01 October 2016, 20:16

Pure poetry, Larry....imagery story telling, spirit and tone, spot on, brother....loved reading this, beautiful poem to recognize and reward, congrats, keep bringin it big guy....cheers

Larry Ran02 October 2016, 03:46

My Brother Poet Chris,

You honor me with your beautiful words! To receive them from such a pundit as yourself, is the greatest reward I could ask for.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Devon La Porte01 October 2016, 20:36

Congratulations Larry. Glad I read this one and completely see why it is indeed a worthy contest winner. This is an absolute favorite of yours of mine. I pinned this for so much of its brilliance, from start to finish, how well penned this was. Peace brother poet...you the man.

Larry Ran02 October 2016, 03:50

My Dear Brother Poet Devon,

Your beautiful words leave me awestruck! To receive them from such a gifted writer as yourself, has left me speechless. I thank you from the bottom of my heart!

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Rose Sho02 October 2016, 03:41

Congrats Sweet Larry.....it is well deserved!

Lots of love....Rose

Larry Ran03 October 2016, 03:45

Hi Sweet Rose,

Thank you.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Greg Etsell02 October 2016, 04:11

larry larry this poem is wonderful wonderful

Larry Ran03 October 2016, 03:46

Hi Greg,

Thank you.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

Tania Notaro03 October 2016, 10:14

Congratulations Larry, so very well deserved.

Larry Ran04 October 2016, 03:42

Hi Tania,

Thank you so much for your kind words.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry

sparrowsong03 October 2016, 18:05

Hello Larry...

Congratulations!

Hugs and Smiles!

sparrowsong

Larry Ran04 October 2016, 03:43

Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,

Thank you so much.

Hugs, Kisses, and Smiles back at you,

xox Larry

Joey Curtis04 October 2016, 03:52

Beautiful poem about my favourite creature of the earth. The tree

Larry Ran04 October 2016, 07:13

Hi Joey,

We are both creatures of the same ilk. The trees throughout the history of mankind, have always been sacred. I think this is our first meeting on Cosmo, but I will climb trees with you any day.

Peace and Love,

xox Larry