~ The Light Of Forever ~
{secrets of the pyramids}
Kiss, the secret yellow with me
In the forever melt of icy day
Where salty stairways gleam
Dare, do dare, give the dream a taste
The taste of knowing's array
Climb, its heights with me, sweet forever
And upon the sleeping dead, loose the fears
Atop the sands of shifting conjecture
Deposit their most rust-colored tears
Retrace, accumulated journey's unclear
Learn, the yellow morning's promise with me
Within the quiet of the mind's eye
Where there waits a cool whisper's possibility
The burning answer to the question why
There exists the light of creation inside...
Dare, do dare, go far beyond the conjecture
Fly free, upon wings, made from the light of forever...
Tony Taylor
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Hello Tony,
this reads like a meditation, I felt transported to Mexico, where the Pyramid of the sun is aligned with the sunrise and sunset. This is a truly tranquil read indeed. A sense of rebirth and awakening, through the journey of discovering its true past and meaning. Beautifully worded as always my friend, your pen is mighty and your mind a wondrous place to reside
Your good friend
Gwen x
Hi GWEN!!....I'm so sorry.....I missed replying to this VERY kind review of my poem........and it is indeed something of a meditation.....so cool that you know of the pyramids in Mexico......I've been there a few times myself....extraordinary power/energy emanating from those places!!.......Thanx so much for this girlfriend!!.....appreciate it my friend!!.....Lots of Love to you and yours!!......smiles.....T xo : )
Tony thank you for adding me to Facebook this is some poem let me Tell you
I love this poem what a masterpiece
Tis pretty darn good in my book sir ... or for that matter, in any darn book
Made me go beyond myself so ya did
to a place of wondrous yellow, and then some
write on my friend :)
Thank you NEVILLE!!........your comments are ever so anticipated these days.......I am so curious about you and your roots of poetic history!!.....Lots of Love to you and yours!!........Peace.......T xo : )
You are most welcome Tony .. Oh' and if you have anything specific in mind that you want to know, please do feel able to ask .. In the meantime .. All Good Things,
Neville :)
Best work ever man I dig this big time
REALLY?......how cool man!!.....thank you kindly Sir......so glad you dig it brother!!......Peace n Stuff!!........T xo : )
Yes dear them all to go beyond conjecture.
Lovely imagery. Had to re read.
Thanx Tons Miss LILIANA!!.......to "Re-read" is the highest of compliments......and the mark of a curious mind!!........Your kind words are more than appreciated dear poet sister......and......apologies for the late reply!!.......I am your cyber-friend and admirer.......T xo : )
nice write Toni Linda
Why Thank You Miss LINDA!!......smiles.......T xo : )