Poem -
THE LILIES OF THE VALLEY
I lay here in the lilies of the valley
looking up at the sky woudering why
I cant stop thinking about you I see
birds flying high in the sky I lay here
in lilies of the valley watching the
butterflies fly by the yellow ones
are my favorite, oh look over there
theres a rainbow, its so peaceful
and quiet here I closed my eyes
I can feel the warm sun on my face
I don't want to ever leave this place
I layed here in the liles of the valley
all day in till the sunset and then
I saw how beautiful the moon
and the stars shined on the liles
of the valley and then I fell sleep
in the liles of the valley.
Comments
I really felt at peace reading this Greg...very lovely work...pinned my friend 💕
thank you Marion
I felt at peace writeing it
I just wish I was there
only in my mind sometime
that the best place thank you pinning
it to
Beautiful Greg pinned xxx
Thank you so much Jill that means a lot to me that you pinned it xxoo
I luv it & adore Lilies in the valley I hadem 42 yrs ago in my wedding bouquet ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much
U r totally welcome
my friend xx
HI Greg...I am sorry I am late responding to this....So much is going on in my life and I am behind on Cosmo...This is beautiful! It is one of my favorite poems by you. It felt surrounded in serenity and peace as I read this...and it made me want to become part of the scene...It felt spiritual and relaxing. This turned out great! Pinned. Love n Hugs. xo
thank you Cherie when I saw
the photo I know I had to write
it I closed my eye and saw myself
there thank you so much for pinning
that means lot peace and love to you
Gregor,
What a beautiful piece of writing, my friend! Lovely imagery, and so well penned. I'm truly impressed.
Great job!!
Matthew.
thank you so much
Matthew when I saw the
the photo I had to write it
it just to me and I closed
eyes and could see myself
in the liles thank you fro pinning
Hi Gregor,
Well, you really nailed it! That was beautiful!!
Thanks,
M.
Thank you Matthew
My Dear Greg,
You have written one of your greatest poems ever. I can smell the sweet aromas of the lilies in every line. Monet used his brush, but you have used the powerful pen.
I love the lilies of the Valley
Their sweet aromas bring me peace
My pent up freed emotions
So ardently released
All my love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry I wished I said
what you just said that would be great
thanks for saying it peace and love to you