Poem -
the lord + I
I'm trying lord
Im really trying lord
Though lame
With all the weight
But I tell myself
There must be purpose here
That I only have to wait
Putting one foot
Behind another
Taking baby steps of fate
Lord, I'm travelling all the
paths you set, I'm closing all
the gates
But I'm crying lord
I'm really crying lord
Creating rivers as I walk
Such torrents as you've never
seen
Flowing hurts that just won't
Heal
And I'm crying lord
I'm really broken lord
Stumbling under weight
But I tell myself
There must be reason here
If only
I can wait
M P 28/6/21
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Comments
Powerful piece MP. ….
Thanks John x
Gosh sending hugs 💗 this is such a heavy hearted read xoxo
Aw thanks Gwen 💞💞
OMG this is truly brilliant Marion my beautiful soul keep trying I need you ❤️💕❤️
That's a fab comment lovely lady ...hugs 💕💕
❤️😍🥰
Oh Marion, my heart goes out to you. This is truly truly brilliant but I know that it is because you are in so much pain. Hugs and more hugs sweet friend x
Sweet Tina...thankyou so much 💞💞
These are such perfectly carved out phrases MARION......that the formatting itself becomes quite poignant.....because the repetition begins to sing and strongly convey the melancholy this piece intends........a beautifully crafted piece that REALLY takes the reader into the world of grief and the fortitude required of the human psyche to deal with the traumatic!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.......ever so insightful dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Thankyou for your beautiful response Tony...hugs 💕