Poem -
The Map
There was once
a time golden,
when it all came
together
and I would spell
your name
backwards quite
simply ..
Because it made
It all seem
magic or special ..
And anyhow,
it was always so
very much
easier to find my
way home
when I wrote it
that way ..
Yes, there was
once a time golden,
when it all came
together ..
When we lived on
small talk,
free love and so
very much
laughter we often
ached all day ..
Back when we both
thought we
might last forever ..
But of course,
we never did, did we ..
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Hi Neville,Β
A golden write
enjoyed this, really made me think about life and relationships we might have it all mapped out in our heads but sometimes we take a different routeΒ
love lorna xxx
How incredibly perceptive & kind of you Lorna .. Many HUGE thank you's x
Oh jeez this got me. Excellent write.Β
Thanks Hj but I fear you are far too generous ..Β Β
Don't worry Nev when we get to Heaven everybody will love everybody else for eternity...on marshmallowΒ mountains and in feathered fields.. .nothing lost ..all things mended...honest x
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I sure hope you aint just kiddin ........ x
lovely write. enjoyed reading your lovely work
thank you Mistress DARKLY .. very muchly appreciated :)Β
'tis a rocky path ...Β love. I have pondered over it deeply, believe me.Β I have come to the conclusion that love would be simple if we all loved in the same way. (Boring too). We would have the same expectations of "happy ever after" and no one would cheat. But love is not like that. We cry over different things and we laugh at different jokes, our favourite colours differ, as do our tastes in film or music or art. We grow intellectually as well as physically and love often bears the brunt of such changes. that being said, love is glorious when its going well ... just hold your breath when cupid drops the bow. Your poem is a masterpiece Neville x
You and me both chuck ..
I agree with every single word here except for that last sentence maybe .. but appreciate the thought more than I am maybe allowed to say here x
wish all of us could work through our differences, this would be better world if we were taught how in school, but really it is the parents job! and often fail! great write Nev!...........................................................Jim
Absolutely .. Cheers Jim .. NevilleΒ